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1/6/2010 c1 magdilen
Good job.
1/31/2008 c1 Bobbie T
This was very well written and a good read. You gave me some excellent visuals, and the emotions were strong. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Bobbie
1/14/2008 c1 Changechild
Excellent stuff! But What about doing a scene where they get back to civilisation? Would the parents of the Brownies be waiting? Would Simon meet them? What happens next?
6/9/2007 c1 Cassandra30
Excellent story! Superb description of Mt. St. Helens blowing and its aftermath as well. I lived on the Eastern side of Washington State in 1980. It went dark in the middle of the day. The street lights came on. When the ash started falling it looked like snow. It dumped four to six inches on us.
6/24/2005 c1 246Lucinda
lol... nothing was said about volcanos. Does this mean that the next Ellison-Sandburg vacation betting pool will include natural disasters?
9/11/2004 c1 14Crazy
Whoa! And this doesn't have a review yet?

Hot Damn, this was awesome! I bet it was pure satisfaction for Jim when he got everyone out too. Not to mention winning the pool! Woo Hoo!

A wonderful read!

~ Crazy

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