for Before Dawn Breaks9/5/2009 c5 X-Gena-X
wow i really confused but in a good way if you get me - its like im so confused i weant to read on so that it makes sense - well anyhoo i have to dash so i cant wait untill you update coz i wanna no what going on lol x
wow i really confused but in a good way if you get me - its like im so confused i weant to read on so that it makes sense - well anyhoo i have to dash so i cant wait untill you update coz i wanna no what going on lol x
9/17/2008 c2 fgb1
I liked your idea of combining twilight and anime, but i still was not able to find out, which anime you are referring to. hope you go on, sounds like an interesting thing to me :D Good work!
I liked your idea of combining twilight and anime, but i still was not able to find out, which anime you are referring to. hope you go on, sounds like an interesting thing to me :D Good work!
9/14/2008 c2 109309344324309
this is AWESOME when r u updating if u dont update i will send u to the volturi !
this is AWESOME when r u updating if u dont update i will send u to the volturi !
9/14/2008 c2 Terra
I kind of get where you are going, but, please, please, please, Don't make every sentence a different paragraph. And instead of using '...', please use commas sometimes, too.
I kind of get where you are going, but, please, please, please, Don't make every sentence a different paragraph. And instead of using '...', please use commas sometimes, too.
9/14/2008 c2 
4Broken Soup
Yeah i thought it was good but it got pretty confusing.
I've read another story that says Bella has wings aswell so that was quite similar but when you write the next chapters it might be different.
/watch?v=dompotjTeIA
watch this! its so funny (its a spoof of twilight)
4Broken SoupYeah i thought it was good but it got pretty confusing.
I've read another story that says Bella has wings aswell so that was quite similar but when you write the next chapters it might be different.
/watch?v=dompotjTeIA
watch this! its so funny (its a spoof of twilight)