5/1/2018 c2 Borello
this story sounds strange but interesting too.
this story sounds strange but interesting too.
6/4/2012 c2 Velshard
"losing" not "looseing" which I'm pretty sure isn't a word... (busts out a Webster), "loosing" however, is. Defined as, to let loose; to release; to free from restraint.
Aside from that gramatical blunder I'm onboard.
Signed, Velshard
"losing" not "looseing" which I'm pretty sure isn't a word... (busts out a Webster), "loosing" however, is. Defined as, to let loose; to release; to free from restraint.
Aside from that gramatical blunder I'm onboard.
Signed, Velshard
12/2/2010 c1 dead acount 78934
Please write more! it was epic! loved it and you need to continue it! it was that awesome!
Please write more! it was epic! loved it and you need to continue it! it was that awesome!
3/1/2009 c1 7Myra the Dovahkiin
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
Hinata, fem. Haku, Temari, Anko, Kurenai, Tsunami, & Yugito should be in the harem.
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
Hinata, fem. Haku, Temari, Anko, Kurenai, Tsunami, & Yugito should be in the harem.