for Golden Rays7/22/2020 c1 
2Irina Hunter
I noticed three minor errors: (1) It's Shinsu Field, singular. (2) "The only one capable of such a wondrous spectacle is none other than our mother and the origin of all that is, Amaterasu!" should be "The only one capable of such a wondrous spectacle is none other than our mother and the origin of all that is good, Amaterasu!". (3) You had Issun mention that a special power was needed to cut the fruit twice.
2Irina HunterI noticed three minor errors: (1) It's Shinsu Field, singular. (2) "The only one capable of such a wondrous spectacle is none other than our mother and the origin of all that is, Amaterasu!" should be "The only one capable of such a wondrous spectacle is none other than our mother and the origin of all that is good, Amaterasu!". (3) You had Issun mention that a special power was needed to cut the fruit twice.
2/10/2009 c1 2Tangledbracken
Excuse me? I shouldn't be on this site? Are you my mother? And don't call me sweetie, kid.
2TangledbrackenExcuse me? I shouldn't be on this site? Are you my mother? And don't call me sweetie, kid.
2/8/2009 c2 MelissaB.Hampton
Oh and I forgot to say in my other review how do you post a fic? i tried and it wouldnt let me.
Oh and I forgot to say in my other review how do you post a fic? i tried and it wouldnt let me.
2/8/2009 c3 MelissaB.Hampton
HOLY SMOKES THIS WAS LONG!
It took me hours to read this...wow! this must have taken you a long time. btw when I post my story, will you read it?
HOLY SMOKES THIS WAS LONG!
It took me hours to read this...wow! this must have taken you a long time. btw when I post my story, will you read it?
11/24/2008 c2 lonely little raindrop
...If i could write as good as you then Id be a famous author...update soon!
...If i could write as good as you then Id be a famous author...update soon!
11/24/2008 c1 lonely little raindrop
Wow this is LONG. It took me about a hour to read also. :( I like youre writing style alot
Wow this is LONG. It took me about a hour to read also. :( I like youre writing style alot
11/8/2008 c1 8Dusky
Ur gonna write the whole story of Okami from the game? sweet XD I don't have time to read all of it right now but I will later (long chapter lol)
8DuskyUr gonna write the whole story of Okami from the game? sweet XD I don't have time to read all of it right now but I will later (long chapter lol)
10/11/2008 c1 8Galestorm Brushfire's Loyalty
Wow this is long. plz read my review on ur other okamii fic.
8Galestorm Brushfire's LoyaltyWow this is long. plz read my review on ur other okamii fic.
9/21/2008 c1 Rosemary
I really like your story so far. I hope you update soon.
I really like your story so far. I hope you update soon.
9/13/2008 c1 8Trisket Trange
Wonderful as usual Ziro. your probably the best writer Ive seen in a while! good job and update soon!
8Trisket TrangeWonderful as usual Ziro. your probably the best writer Ive seen in a while! good job and update soon!