for Turning Back the Pendulum1/19/2011 c4 
4Lillian81
This is a wonderful story! I just love it. It's sweet and now Obi-Wan canto back and change thing and they can have the happy ending they deserve! Just a question, how long is this story going to account for, as in will it just be episode 1 time zone, or will you go longer? Please update soon because this is really good!
4Lillian81This is a wonderful story! I just love it. It's sweet and now Obi-Wan canto back and change thing and they can have the happy ending they deserve! Just a question, how long is this story going to account for, as in will it just be episode 1 time zone, or will you go longer? Please update soon because this is really good!
1/18/2011 c4 5charliebrown1234
Yay! Another time travel fic! Man, people just keep churning these out... I love it! Keep updating please, I always enjoy a fresh new take on this kind of situation!
~charliebrown1234
5charliebrown1234Yay! Another time travel fic! Man, people just keep churning these out... I love it! Keep updating please, I always enjoy a fresh new take on this kind of situation!
~charliebrown1234
1/18/2011 c4 5MobiObi
Wow, this is great, especially considering English isn't your first language. Keep up the great work, I can't wait to see how your Obi handles the Maul situation. And the relationship he's building with Anakin is very touching. It's going to be interesting to see that develop and how Qui-Gon handles it.
5MobiObiWow, this is great, especially considering English isn't your first language. Keep up the great work, I can't wait to see how your Obi handles the Maul situation. And the relationship he's building with Anakin is very touching. It's going to be interesting to see that develop and how Qui-Gon handles it.
1/2/2011 c3 Valkarious
Very much looking froward to reading more of this keep the good work coming :)!
Very much looking froward to reading more of this keep the good work coming :)!
12/8/2010 c3 32Lady Laran
Awesome story. I'm curious as to the link between him and Qui-Gon. I'm adding you to my subscription list and hope you'll update soon!
32Lady LaranAwesome story. I'm curious as to the link between him and Qui-Gon. I'm adding you to my subscription list and hope you'll update soon!
4/20/2010 c3 19Tanydwr
Wonderful. I love stories where Obi-Wan's thrown back in time to fix things. And you've just had Obi-Wan voice just about all my beliefs about the Jedi's mistakes when it came to training Anakin. Excellent.
I liked Anakin's impression that Padmé and Obi-Wan seem 'jealous' of time spent with him, and his own disbelief that they could like him so much. You write him extremely well. I definitely look forward to the relationships that will form between the three of them - four of them if Obi-Wan manages to ensure Qui-Gon survives.
Of course, Qui-Gon's survival may well impact Dooku's actions as well...
Keep up the good work.
19TanydwrWonderful. I love stories where Obi-Wan's thrown back in time to fix things. And you've just had Obi-Wan voice just about all my beliefs about the Jedi's mistakes when it came to training Anakin. Excellent.
I liked Anakin's impression that Padmé and Obi-Wan seem 'jealous' of time spent with him, and his own disbelief that they could like him so much. You write him extremely well. I definitely look forward to the relationships that will form between the three of them - four of them if Obi-Wan manages to ensure Qui-Gon survives.
Of course, Qui-Gon's survival may well impact Dooku's actions as well...
Keep up the good work.
4/19/2010 c3 30Darth KenObi-Wan
I'm liking this so far, but that's not why I'm leaving a review. :p
Author's notes aren't actually allowed as a chapter, so that's probably why it was deleted. :) *disappears back into the interwebz*
30Darth KenObi-WanI'm liking this so far, but that's not why I'm leaving a review. :p
Author's notes aren't actually allowed as a chapter, so that's probably why it was deleted. :) *disappears back into the interwebz*
4/19/2010 c3 45WynCatastrophe
Very exciting! The plot thickens. I do hope you'll be able to update soonishly ... you mention that it won't be until you finish a couple of projects, but school schedules are so different that that doesn't convey much to the average estadounidense reader! Anyway, I'm enjoying the story immensely and can't wait to see the next installment. Well done!
45WynCatastropheVery exciting! The plot thickens. I do hope you'll be able to update soonishly ... you mention that it won't be until you finish a couple of projects, but school schedules are so different that that doesn't convey much to the average estadounidense reader! Anyway, I'm enjoying the story immensely and can't wait to see the next installment. Well done!
4/19/2010 c3 4FairyVampire
i really enjoyed this chapter and how the plot moved along. i can't wait to see how this will affect the timeline
4FairyVampirei really enjoyed this chapter and how the plot moved along. i can't wait to see how this will affect the timeline
11/5/2009 c3 10PastaSentient
It's cool. Just so long as you update it eventually I am fine. I have patience...and massive amounts of video games to keep me busy. :)
10PastaSentientIt's cool. Just so long as you update it eventually I am fine. I have patience...and massive amounts of video games to keep me busy. :)