
6/10/2009 c2
4FairyVampire
i'm quite interested in this story and am glad that you have picked it back up. i am wondering how obi-wan is going to explain this. :)

i'm quite interested in this story and am glad that you have picked it back up. i am wondering how obi-wan is going to explain this. :)
4/26/2009 c2
1zafaran
I'm looking forward to when you get a chance to post more of the story. Ben going back to the past and changing things is a story type I enjoy, and you've got a very good beginning in this prologue, and I can't wait to find out what happens next. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm

I'm looking forward to when you get a chance to post more of the story. Ben going back to the past and changing things is a story type I enjoy, and you've got a very good beginning in this prologue, and I can't wait to find out what happens next. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
3/2/2009 c2
28ArtisticAbandon
YAHO!
You're completely forgiven! (Can't complain, cause I've done that a time or two.)
Just make sure you replace the note with the new chapter. Nothing's worse than having a note-for-a-chapter interrupt the flow of a story. (Sorry. Personal pet peeve.)
SahRae

YAHO!
You're completely forgiven! (Can't complain, cause I've done that a time or two.)
Just make sure you replace the note with the new chapter. Nothing's worse than having a note-for-a-chapter interrupt the flow of a story. (Sorry. Personal pet peeve.)
SahRae
1/4/2009 c1
4The Chaotic Soul of Demons
I really liked this one, and would love to read more. All of the time-travel fics I've read have been from the POV of a Skywalker, so having Obi-Wan be the one to try and change things would be a nice change of pace.

I really liked this one, and would love to read more. All of the time-travel fics I've read have been from the POV of a Skywalker, so having Obi-Wan be the one to try and change things would be a nice change of pace.
11/16/2008 c1
4FairyVampire
great story so far. i really like this idea and hope you continue with it.

great story so far. i really like this idea and hope you continue with it.
10/1/2008 c1
28ArtisticAbandon
A really interesting beginning. Please tell me there's more of this.
Maybe I'm biased, or maybe I'm jaded from all the stories I've read recently, but I really enjoyed it, and its not often I enjoy stories of this quality without mentally pulling them to pieces. Its especially hard to do that in the time-travel genre. So please, more?
SRH

A really interesting beginning. Please tell me there's more of this.
Maybe I'm biased, or maybe I'm jaded from all the stories I've read recently, but I really enjoyed it, and its not often I enjoy stories of this quality without mentally pulling them to pieces. Its especially hard to do that in the time-travel genre. So please, more?
SRH
9/14/2008 c1
17Lincoln Six Echo
Well, the prologue and the summary are quite interesting, so I hope you will post more.

Well, the prologue and the summary are quite interesting, so I hope you will post more.