for Fox Emblem7/9/2015 c1 Hideki Takahashi
Kiwi is a fruit...the village ur so desperately trying to say is KIRI otherwise known as MIST
Kiwi is a fruit...the village ur so desperately trying to say is KIRI otherwise known as MIST
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2/13/2013 c3 Guest
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11/19/2012 c2 Random Chick
Tyuya is spelled Tayuya. Don't lose interest! I like your story!
Tyuya is spelled Tayuya. Don't lose interest! I like your story!
11/19/2012 c1 Random Chick
You keep saying Kiwi... Do you not mean Kiri meaning the Mist Village or Kumo the Cloud Village? Those 2 are separate by the way and Kumo was the one that kidnapped Hinata. By the way, could you specify Hinata's age? I can't tell how old she is.
You keep saying Kiwi... Do you not mean Kiri meaning the Mist Village or Kumo the Cloud Village? Those 2 are separate by the way and Kumo was the one that kidnapped Hinata. By the way, could you specify Hinata's age? I can't tell how old she is.
8/15/2012 c4 Guest
i really liked it update soon your on my faves list
i really liked it update soon your on my faves list
8/15/2012 c2 Guest
its a romance isnt it i like romances
its a romance isnt it i like romances
8/8/2012 c2 Umm yea
ok you need to spell check before you post, lots of mistakes. You spelled Tayuya name wrong, i didn't even make it to the end of the chapter. But that' just me, so good luck on your story.
ok you need to spell check before you post, lots of mistakes. You spelled Tayuya name wrong, i didn't even make it to the end of the chapter. But that' just me, so good luck on your story.
4/7/2012 c1 
1Kauris Azurai
I'm sorry. I just couldn't hold it in. The laughter that is. I am sorry if I am offending you by saying this but; Kiwi-nin just cracked me up. When I read that my first thought was... YUMMY!
lol, bwahahahaha!11!1!
I think you meant kiri-nin. as in water country ninja. however, a kiwi nin- Is one FRUITY ninja!
...sorry couldn't help myself.
In canon, a Kumo nin, meaning cloud ninja- tried to kidnap Hinata.
Was that what you meant?
If you really did mean kiwi nin- then I gotta congratulate you on your humor.
not meaning to make fun, but ya gotta admit when you've made a pun. and that nin has just been juiced, by naruto.
Sorry for being fruity.
～Kauris Azurai
1Kauris AzuraiI'm sorry. I just couldn't hold it in. The laughter that is. I am sorry if I am offending you by saying this but; Kiwi-nin just cracked me up. When I read that my first thought was... YUMMY!
lol, bwahahahaha!11!1!
I think you meant kiri-nin. as in water country ninja. however, a kiwi nin- Is one FRUITY ninja!
...sorry couldn't help myself.
In canon, a Kumo nin, meaning cloud ninja- tried to kidnap Hinata.
Was that what you meant?
If you really did mean kiwi nin- then I gotta congratulate you on your humor.
not meaning to make fun, but ya gotta admit when you've made a pun. and that nin has just been juiced, by naruto.
Sorry for being fruity.
～Kauris Azurai
2/24/2011 c4 Hyper-Blossom Zlogin trouble
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! ! !
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! ! !
11/9/2008 c3 akiho tonoshi
well... the systems down at the moment while i write this review so i'll just use the same name as my account.
theres a few things i've seen that could help you. first, sense, the word that your looking for is since. (sense)since you thought of this we shall try it out with your team.
and second. everytime someone knew talks you need a new sentence. ex:(from your story)
“I don’t know, but hey, don’t point it out. My dad will make me give him up if you do, also people might get suspicious because of the Kyuubi attack a few years ago. He may have a little fox in him but he is a loyal dog at heart.” Hinata said
‘Thanks a lot…’ Naruto said sarcastically.
Tyuya nodded, “Ok, I will. Also, how did you come up with that fighting style of yours? I’ve never seen or heard of anything like it.”
“I came up with it on my own, that’s why I offered to help you.” Hinata finished packing and slung the bag onto her back. Both girls walked to Tyuyas small apartment, which was deserted at the time and got Tyuyas stuff before heading out to the gate.
and i say you need longer chapters^^
well... the systems down at the moment while i write this review so i'll just use the same name as my account.
theres a few things i've seen that could help you. first, sense, the word that your looking for is since. (sense)since you thought of this we shall try it out with your team.
and second. everytime someone knew talks you need a new sentence. ex:(from your story)
“I don’t know, but hey, don’t point it out. My dad will make me give him up if you do, also people might get suspicious because of the Kyuubi attack a few years ago. He may have a little fox in him but he is a loyal dog at heart.” Hinata said
‘Thanks a lot…’ Naruto said sarcastically.
Tyuya nodded, “Ok, I will. Also, how did you come up with that fighting style of yours? I’ve never seen or heard of anything like it.”
“I came up with it on my own, that’s why I offered to help you.” Hinata finished packing and slung the bag onto her back. Both girls walked to Tyuyas small apartment, which was deserted at the time and got Tyuyas stuff before heading out to the gate.
and i say you need longer chapters^^