9/14/2008 c2 7Passionate-Eyes
hm, I'm, for some reason, thinking that naruto and hinata will be going through hell as the story progresses...but i'd rather wait and see where it goes

9/14/2008 c2 8AiyaandChouji
First off, it's spelled Tayuya. And if I'm not wrong, Genin, Chunin, and Jonin. So far it's really good. Keep it up.