for Angels Revealed9/28/2014 c2 nessienoodle
I love the story! Please make sure that there is some clace action in this story! And can alec be straight in the one and him and jaclyn fall in love? Please! Thanks a lot! And I am expecting sizzy!
I love the story! Please make sure that there is some clace action in this story! And can alec be straight in the one and him and jaclyn fall in love? Please! Thanks a lot! And I am expecting sizzy!
8/27/2011 c2 
2Chantel Royal
This is really good so far! I hope you update soon. In my story I was going to give Clary a big sister also but I changed it to a little sister last minute! What are the chances of that huh? Anyway I like what you're doing here, so keep it up and update soon :)
2Chantel RoyalThis is really good so far! I hope you update soon. In my story I was going to give Clary a big sister also but I changed it to a little sister last minute! What are the chances of that huh? Anyway I like what you're doing here, so keep it up and update soon :)
4/11/2009 c2 17NeuroticMuse413
Very interesting. Nice subtle use of humor, but what a TOTAL Mary Sue!
17NeuroticMuse413Very interesting. Nice subtle use of humor, but what a TOTAL Mary Sue!
11/4/2008 c1 6bellacitron
hey love,
fabulous chapter, as always. its bean a while since i read some of your work and i'm not dissapointed, to say the least. but what about ELLACULLEN? cerials her doll, i dont mean to be a bitch but i'm getting tetchy here. what happens if there is a long weakend at forks high? where will the cullens go? more importantly WHERE WOULD STEPHAN GO AND HOW DOES THAT RELATE TO ELLA? what happens after school on the day jasper finds out stephan is a vapire? what if they start making out or something and edward sees them and goes doppleganger and beats the shit out of Stephan? what would ella do? and the rest of the cullens? how would they feel to thier niece and grandaughter being so much like her father she found love in the dreary froks high school? would edward go comander in overprotection? HUH? HUH? I REALLY WANT TO KMOW DAMN IT!
PEACE AND LOVE
BELLACITRON
:}
6bellacitronhey love,
fabulous chapter, as always. its bean a while since i read some of your work and i'm not dissapointed, to say the least. but what about ELLACULLEN? cerials her doll, i dont mean to be a bitch but i'm getting tetchy here. what happens if there is a long weakend at forks high? where will the cullens go? more importantly WHERE WOULD STEPHAN GO AND HOW DOES THAT RELATE TO ELLA? what happens after school on the day jasper finds out stephan is a vapire? what if they start making out or something and edward sees them and goes doppleganger and beats the shit out of Stephan? what would ella do? and the rest of the cullens? how would they feel to thier niece and grandaughter being so much like her father she found love in the dreary froks high school? would edward go comander in overprotection? HUH? HUH? I REALLY WANT TO KMOW DAMN IT!
PEACE AND LOVE
BELLACITRON
:}
11/1/2008 c2 ChristianAngel01
Whoa awesome chapter There is alot more detail and it has alot of fantasy ohh and a decendent of an angel way cool cant wait for the next chapter
Whoa awesome chapter There is alot more detail and it has alot of fantasy ohh and a decendent of an angel way cool cant wait for the next chapter
11/1/2008 c1 ChristianAngel01
Whoa This is a very interesting story I cant wait to read the next chapter :)
Whoa This is a very interesting story I cant wait to read the next chapter :)
11/1/2008 c1 5Laugh Attack
I was gonna call you but I figured that you'd be on here checking reviews instead.
Revalations isn't at Borders, I just went and they had none. They only had Blue Bloods and Masquerade, which is weird because I figured they had Revalations.
Just to let you know.
:P
5Laugh AttackI was gonna call you but I figured that you'd be on here checking reviews instead.
Revalations isn't at Borders, I just went and they had none. They only had Blue Bloods and Masquerade, which is weird because I figured they had Revalations.
Just to let you know.
:P
9/15/2008 c1 AccountKiller35847130982354635
This is a great premise, I'm suprised that no-one's done it before! The naration is good, the only thing I would change is when JC says something like "...my smooth strawberry blond curls... contrasted tremendously with my navy blue...shirt..." It sounds realy conceited, I doubt even very vain people think like that. Maybe work in descriptions of JC so they're more subtle?
This is a great premise, I'm suprised that no-one's done it before! The naration is good, the only thing I would change is when JC says something like "...my smooth strawberry blond curls... contrasted tremendously with my navy blue...shirt..." It sounds realy conceited, I doubt even very vain people think like that. Maybe work in descriptions of JC so they're more subtle?