for Destiny9/21/2008 c1 
8sdchuckfan
Loved it. I like seeing Bryce's point of view and how he felt about his betrayal of Chuck. Keep on writing.
8sdchuckfanLoved it. I like seeing Bryce's point of view and how he felt about his betrayal of Chuck. Keep on writing.
9/16/2008 c1 12Shrimpy Kay
Beautiful. I liked how it was more of the serious kind of story, but left us with a laugh. The last part really balanced the darker (yet not unhappy) mood of the first half. And I agree with the fact that Bryce is NOT evil, he's just misunderstood.
I think that Morgan ends up being the first man, because being Chuck's best friend, he would settle for no less. And Bryce just stood there laughing at the way he would phrase his argument on why he should be best man.
So yeah, I really like it. You should write more.
12Shrimpy KayBeautiful. I liked how it was more of the serious kind of story, but left us with a laugh. The last part really balanced the darker (yet not unhappy) mood of the first half. And I agree with the fact that Bryce is NOT evil, he's just misunderstood.
I think that Morgan ends up being the first man, because being Chuck's best friend, he would settle for no less. And Bryce just stood there laughing at the way he would phrase his argument on why he should be best man.
So yeah, I really like it. You should write more.
9/16/2008 c1 9tshdow
Other than putting Bryce as a good guy, it was good. ^) Sorry, I have never been a Bryce fan.
9tshdowOther than putting Bryce as a good guy, it was good. ^) Sorry, I have never been a Bryce fan.
9/16/2008 c1 2jagged1
Very nice! I especially liked this line, from Bryce's POV 'He had saved every person he had come in contact with, in more ways then one. Whether it was their life, soul, or computer. He gave everything willingly and without asking anything in return.' Hope to see your writing more.
2jagged1Very nice! I especially liked this line, from Bryce's POV 'He had saved every person he had come in contact with, in more ways then one. Whether it was their life, soul, or computer. He gave everything willingly and without asking anything in return.' Hope to see your writing more.
9/16/2008 c1 40BillAtWork
I liked this. We don't get to see Bryce's pov that often. Hope you write more Chuck.
40BillAtWorkI liked this. We don't get to see Bryce's pov that often. Hope you write more Chuck.
9/16/2008 c1 13galliechan
This was quite a good story. I had read many stories where Bryce were sorry for Chuck but this one was from a different perspective. The last part was cute. Nice work :)
13galliechanThis was quite a good story. I had read many stories where Bryce were sorry for Chuck but this one was from a different perspective. The last part was cute. Nice work :)