for The Light in the Fifth Floor Bedroom1/10 c19 Elma Meroux
Hi!
I’m a French reader, so my English is not very good. Sorry for mistakes.
I discovered this fanfic in French because a girl translate this. It was a good experience, and the story mama mia a good one ! But she translated only 13 chapters and I didn’t have the next part of the fanfic. So I decided to read in English, and I learned a lot of words haha! It was a good experience for me and I enjoyed to read your story !
I hope someday I will read the end of this amazing fanfic about Naruto.
I hope you are well!
In French we said: « ca déchire sa mère ! »
Hi!
I’m a French reader, so my English is not very good. Sorry for mistakes.
I discovered this fanfic in French because a girl translate this. It was a good experience, and the story mama mia a good one ! But she translated only 13 chapters and I didn’t have the next part of the fanfic. So I decided to read in English, and I learned a lot of words haha! It was a good experience for me and I enjoyed to read your story !
I hope someday I will read the end of this amazing fanfic about Naruto.
I hope you are well!
In French we said: « ca déchire sa mère ! »
10/21/2024 c19 Ellasauras
I've spent the last week obsessively reading this.
I only read slash Naruto fics, but by the third chapter I wasn't sure if romance, let alone yaoi, was going to be an element to this story and honestly I didn't care. Right from the get go, you're pulled in. This work reminds me of the thriller mysteries of the 90s and early 2000s, I love it so much. I've even indulged to my non Naruto friends so much about this Fic that they want to read it. I've been reading Naruto fanfiction literally since 2007 and I can without a doubt say this is EASILY Top 10, probably Top 5. It's absolutely amazing.
As someone who used to write so much fanfiction throughout middle and high school though, as an adult it's hard to find the time to sit and make these things come to fruition. I have so many notes on my phone of things I WANT to write but won't have the time to. So even if you don't come back, the quality that's here is enough.
I hope you're doing well <3
I've spent the last week obsessively reading this.
I only read slash Naruto fics, but by the third chapter I wasn't sure if romance, let alone yaoi, was going to be an element to this story and honestly I didn't care. Right from the get go, you're pulled in. This work reminds me of the thriller mysteries of the 90s and early 2000s, I love it so much. I've even indulged to my non Naruto friends so much about this Fic that they want to read it. I've been reading Naruto fanfiction literally since 2007 and I can without a doubt say this is EASILY Top 10, probably Top 5. It's absolutely amazing.
As someone who used to write so much fanfiction throughout middle and high school though, as an adult it's hard to find the time to sit and make these things come to fruition. I have so many notes on my phone of things I WANT to write but won't have the time to. So even if you don't come back, the quality that's here is enough.
I hope you're doing well <3
3/24/2024 c1 lunaga13
I don't have words to describe how much I think and love this fanfic. It has become a constant presence in my thoughts, a story I find myself returning to again and again, eagerly awaiting new chapters.
I adore the way you write and how effortlessly you weave intricate plots and captivating characters. Your ability to create an atmosphere of mystery and terror is truly remarkable. There were countless moments where I found myself holding my breath, completely immersed in the world you have created.
The attention to detail you put into it is wonderful. I found myself scrutinizing every paragraph, unraveling every clue you've scattered throughout the story. Your talent for leaving subtle hints and predicting future events is simply masterful, keeping me on the edge of my seat and eagerly speculating about what's to come.
As much as I love immersing myself in the world you've created, I can't help but wonder about the person behind the screen. I sincerely hope you are well and that life treats you very well.
(I apologize if my comment is not very clear, English is not my first language and I had difficulty describing in English how much I appreciate your story and how much I hope you are doing well)
Thanks you for sharing this beautiful story!
I don't have words to describe how much I think and love this fanfic. It has become a constant presence in my thoughts, a story I find myself returning to again and again, eagerly awaiting new chapters.
I adore the way you write and how effortlessly you weave intricate plots and captivating characters. Your ability to create an atmosphere of mystery and terror is truly remarkable. There were countless moments where I found myself holding my breath, completely immersed in the world you have created.
The attention to detail you put into it is wonderful. I found myself scrutinizing every paragraph, unraveling every clue you've scattered throughout the story. Your talent for leaving subtle hints and predicting future events is simply masterful, keeping me on the edge of my seat and eagerly speculating about what's to come.
As much as I love immersing myself in the world you've created, I can't help but wonder about the person behind the screen. I sincerely hope you are well and that life treats you very well.
(I apologize if my comment is not very clear, English is not my first language and I had difficulty describing in English how much I appreciate your story and how much I hope you are doing well)
Thanks you for sharing this beautiful story!
9/27/2023 c19 Guest
You know, I wasn't expecting another chapter when I came around again. I have to say I've been reading this story over and over every couple of years. This story sticks to my mind like gum to a shoe and buzzes around until I just HAVE to return and read It all again. I think I've commented once before that If you decided to change the characters to your own and make this into a book, It would be very successful. And If I hadn't said It, It's been something I have been thinking for years and years!
I'm so so glad that you still have passion for this story, even though I know you have evolved and changed as a person. I've been reading your stories since you began writing them, and am STILL a HUGE HUGE fan. Your style of writing hooks me every time. I patiently look forward to your return always, as I'm sure many others do as well. and If you end up writing somewhere else, I'd love for you to link us readers to that as well. Until you write again! - Kano
You know, I wasn't expecting another chapter when I came around again. I have to say I've been reading this story over and over every couple of years. This story sticks to my mind like gum to a shoe and buzzes around until I just HAVE to return and read It all again. I think I've commented once before that If you decided to change the characters to your own and make this into a book, It would be very successful. And If I hadn't said It, It's been something I have been thinking for years and years!
I'm so so glad that you still have passion for this story, even though I know you have evolved and changed as a person. I've been reading your stories since you began writing them, and am STILL a HUGE HUGE fan. Your style of writing hooks me every time. I patiently look forward to your return always, as I'm sure many others do as well. and If you end up writing somewhere else, I'd love for you to link us readers to that as well. Until you write again! - Kano
5/21/2023 c1 Guest
Omg, the 3 at the end of my last comment was supposed to be a heart u_u (and changed all my multiple exclamation marks to just one? They really were like "settle down now" lmao, but this fic is giving me too many feelings for that!)
Omg, the 3 at the end of my last comment was supposed to be a heart u_u (and changed all my multiple exclamation marks to just one? They really were like "settle down now" lmao, but this fic is giving me too many feelings for that!)
5/21/2023 c19 Guest
Aaahh I feel like I have so much to say about this that I don't even know where to start omg...
This story is so haunting and intense, I've never read a fic quite like this before. I love the atmosphere and how genuinely creepy it is, and the mystery is fantastic, if anything just the sheer number of clues and threads to follow and the attention to detail are incredible. It was so interesting whenever small parts of the puzzle would come together... but I still have so many questions omg!? I'm dying to know the full story of exactly what the hell has been going on... what are the Akatsuki doing and what do they want? What's Gaara's (and Shikamaru's?) connection to them, is he working with them willingly? And Sasuke's involvement? Why fake his death? (And just the reveal that he's alive omg...!) So many smaller things that I'm so curious about too. Like what did Seichi see, and what was going on with Sakura and him? Who was the black haired man in the window at the beginning? Aaaaaaa
I feel like we still have so much information missing about Gaara's backstory and his abuse in particular too... Like Yashamaru said they only had the first part of the story after he confessed, and (if I'm remembering right bc it was in one of the earlier chapters and I don't know which one to go back and check haha) didn't Gaara's diary entry say there were two robed figures who would enter his room, and a third was there watching one time? Plus the discrepancy Naruto was sort of picking up on with how Yashamaru seemed to believe he was in love with Gaara and that being at odds with the broken pelvis/injuries, which feels like the actions of someone else. I'm surprised nobody is suspecting his dad more (I have my suspicions about this mf... :I ) I'm SO curious about Kankuro and Temari too, and whatever information they might have. Temari especially, I really hope she'll show up in future chapters bc I would love to hear what she has to say...
I can't find anywhere to add this but Sai's death hurt me so much djjdjsj RIP my boy he didn't deserve that ;_; Gaara just couldn't let the narusai happen lmao.
Anyway omg, before I continue rambling... there's SO much more I want to say, I feel like I could talk and theorise about this fic for hours lmao but this comment is long already. But I really hope you'll come back and finish this someday because I would absolutely love to read the rest of the story! I know how life can get in the way of these things, but the fact that you came back to update it after 7 years gives me hope that you'd never fully abandon it haha. So I just want you to know it will be greatly appreciated, however long it takes 3
Aaahh I feel like I have so much to say about this that I don't even know where to start omg...
This story is so haunting and intense, I've never read a fic quite like this before. I love the atmosphere and how genuinely creepy it is, and the mystery is fantastic, if anything just the sheer number of clues and threads to follow and the attention to detail are incredible. It was so interesting whenever small parts of the puzzle would come together... but I still have so many questions omg!? I'm dying to know the full story of exactly what the hell has been going on... what are the Akatsuki doing and what do they want? What's Gaara's (and Shikamaru's?) connection to them, is he working with them willingly? And Sasuke's involvement? Why fake his death? (And just the reveal that he's alive omg...!) So many smaller things that I'm so curious about too. Like what did Seichi see, and what was going on with Sakura and him? Who was the black haired man in the window at the beginning? Aaaaaaa
I feel like we still have so much information missing about Gaara's backstory and his abuse in particular too... Like Yashamaru said they only had the first part of the story after he confessed, and (if I'm remembering right bc it was in one of the earlier chapters and I don't know which one to go back and check haha) didn't Gaara's diary entry say there were two robed figures who would enter his room, and a third was there watching one time? Plus the discrepancy Naruto was sort of picking up on with how Yashamaru seemed to believe he was in love with Gaara and that being at odds with the broken pelvis/injuries, which feels like the actions of someone else. I'm surprised nobody is suspecting his dad more (I have my suspicions about this mf... :I ) I'm SO curious about Kankuro and Temari too, and whatever information they might have. Temari especially, I really hope she'll show up in future chapters bc I would love to hear what she has to say...
I can't find anywhere to add this but Sai's death hurt me so much djjdjsj RIP my boy he didn't deserve that ;_; Gaara just couldn't let the narusai happen lmao.
Anyway omg, before I continue rambling... there's SO much more I want to say, I feel like I could talk and theorise about this fic for hours lmao but this comment is long already. But I really hope you'll come back and finish this someday because I would absolutely love to read the rest of the story! I know how life can get in the way of these things, but the fact that you came back to update it after 7 years gives me hope that you'd never fully abandon it haha. So I just want you to know it will be greatly appreciated, however long it takes 3
11/17/2022 c19 SinOnSikil
This story has been on my mind for literal years and I'm still depressed and frustrated it was abandoned. Writers like you are rare, and we still need you.
This story has been on my mind for literal years and I'm still depressed and frustrated it was abandoned. Writers like you are rare, and we still need you.
10/26/2022 c19 Enthusiast
Just read your story again after a few years. I can never get tired of its peculiar vibe. It's literally impossible to look away once I start reading. Only good thing is having screen glasses now, so I can binge it without having my eyes being too blood-shoted, hah! Thank you for all you've written so far! Wish you the best, and hope to read more from you one day :)
Just read your story again after a few years. I can never get tired of its peculiar vibe. It's literally impossible to look away once I start reading. Only good thing is having screen glasses now, so I can binge it without having my eyes being too blood-shoted, hah! Thank you for all you've written so far! Wish you the best, and hope to read more from you one day :)
9/19/2022 c19 TechnoAngelprincess
omg it's been years since I re visited this story and it's still have me on the edge of my seat. Hopefully it will continue,
omg it's been years since I re visited this story and it's still have me on the edge of my seat. Hopefully it will continue,
9/18/2022 c17 TechnoAngelprincess
I think this chapter put thing in a better prospective and thing are coming together.
I think this chapter put thing in a better prospective and thing are coming together.
7/9/2022 c19 Guest
I remember reading this years ago now and I recently came back to fanficfion. I reread this and was surprised to see it’s been updated since the last time I saw it. I hope you’re well and taking care. One day I hope I can come back to this and see it finished.
I remember reading this years ago now and I recently came back to fanficfion. I reread this and was surprised to see it’s been updated since the last time I saw it. I hope you’re well and taking care. One day I hope I can come back to this and see it finished.
5/3/2022 c19 Guest
Tell me you've got plans to finish this I legit looked this up on a whim cause ai wrote it down a long time ago hoping one day it wod update qnd I'm so happy you did! Idc if it takes another year whatevers best for your mental health I just really enjoy following along
Tell me you've got plans to finish this I legit looked this up on a whim cause ai wrote it down a long time ago hoping one day it wod update qnd I'm so happy you did! Idc if it takes another year whatevers best for your mental health I just really enjoy following along
2/19/2022 c1 Ryne-ssi84
OMG! FINALLY. To be able to read this after soooo long. I don't even read ff now since starting my adult life but randomly decide to come a look this up after thinking about it makes me super happy to see it was recently updated with intentions of finishing!
OMG! FINALLY. To be able to read this after soooo long. I don't even read ff now since starting my adult life but randomly decide to come a look this up after thinking about it makes me super happy to see it was recently updated with intentions of finishing!