for It's Deductible10/25/2008 c1 
121Kimberly T
...Wow.
You have one helluva talent for channelling Bruce and Clark in your writing, that's all I can say.
121Kimberly T...Wow.
You have one helluva talent for channelling Bruce and Clark in your writing, that's all I can say.
10/4/2008 c1 Emperor Jaden
At first, title put me off by a -little- bit. However ,reading the summary, I decided to check it out..and -wow-, I'm glad a did. Very well written! Congrats on this wonderful piece of work!
At first, title put me off by a -little- bit. However ,reading the summary, I decided to check it out..and -wow-, I'm glad a did. Very well written! Congrats on this wonderful piece of work!
10/2/2008 c1 5Leanna Y
I love how you wrote the story. I can't really think of anything else to say other then i loved it.
5Leanna YI love how you wrote the story. I can't really think of anything else to say other then i loved it.
9/28/2008 c1 6JerichoGirl
You did it again. I love how you captured the inner feelings of Batman, that Bruce Wayne was the mask(I always loved that aspect of Batman as a hero). Luthor however is a jerk-off doodiehead(for lack of a better word) and I would like to dress him up in a robin suit and shoot at him. Anyway I like how at the end Bruce comes to his own realization that both halves to his coin are good and that rich guys can walk in the light too, something Clark has to always point out. Like I've said before I love the dynamics of their relationship, you always hit it dead-on. Bravo!
T_T 8D
6JerichoGirlYou did it again. I love how you captured the inner feelings of Batman, that Bruce Wayne was the mask(I always loved that aspect of Batman as a hero). Luthor however is a jerk-off doodiehead(for lack of a better word) and I would like to dress him up in a robin suit and shoot at him. Anyway I like how at the end Bruce comes to his own realization that both halves to his coin are good and that rich guys can walk in the light too, something Clark has to always point out. Like I've said before I love the dynamics of their relationship, you always hit it dead-on. Bravo!
T_T 8D
9/27/2008 c1 5sylphxpression
Hm. Not really sure I understood all of that, but then I'm used to dealing with the magical rather than the merely supernatural.
5sylphxpressionHm. Not really sure I understood all of that, but then I'm used to dealing with the magical rather than the merely supernatural.
9/23/2008 c1 4XxEnigmaxX
sorry i didnt review sooner! :D jk lol. anywho- *coughs* soo coot. i like the deepness in the conversations. :) and how the suit is "brucies" disguise. very clevah! ;) and OF COURRSSEE superman just "happened" by to see the suit fall. mhm. WE ALL KNOW THE TRUTH! XD XD tee hee i love ur story (ies) as usual! very brilliant creativity you have. :)
CB!
4XxEnigmaxXsorry i didnt review sooner! :D jk lol. anywho- *coughs* soo coot. i like the deepness in the conversations. :) and how the suit is "brucies" disguise. very clevah! ;) and OF COURRSSEE superman just "happened" by to see the suit fall. mhm. WE ALL KNOW THE TRUTH! XD XD tee hee i love ur story (ies) as usual! very brilliant creativity you have. :)
CB!
9/20/2008 c1 5Xiilnek
Aw. Love. I love how Clark helps Bruce keep going; I'm sure Bruce does/would do the same for him if he needed it. I love that. I love how close they are, and the way you write them. A favorite line:
The door that connected his room to Alfred’s opened, and Alfred stepped in, completely unfazed by the sight of Master Bruce doing pushups in his underwear.
This has humor along with emotional impact, and that's awesome. *adds to favorites*
5XiilnekAw. Love. I love how Clark helps Bruce keep going; I'm sure Bruce does/would do the same for him if he needed it. I love that. I love how close they are, and the way you write them. A favorite line:
The door that connected his room to Alfred’s opened, and Alfred stepped in, completely unfazed by the sight of Master Bruce doing pushups in his underwear.
This has humor along with emotional impact, and that's awesome. *adds to favorites*
9/19/2008 c1 9Naga
Aw... that is so sweet, despite Luthor's pawing all over Bruce. Like one of the best stories out of DC's World's Finest. And Clark in Bruce Wayne's Giorgio Armani suit? *swoon*
How about Calvin Klein for Superman?
9NagaAw... that is so sweet, despite Luthor's pawing all over Bruce. Like one of the best stories out of DC's World's Finest. And Clark in Bruce Wayne's Giorgio Armani suit? *swoon*
How about Calvin Klein for Superman?
9/18/2008 c1 12oksofia
Aww, Duny, this is really sweet. And really heavy.
"They loved it when he was sociable" - right then and there, you set the tone for the whole story. It's all a charade for Bruce, it takes a toll on him, and the others of his set will "punish" him if he doesn't live up to social expectations. Very claws-out, monsters-behind-facade kind of thing. And totally tragic.
The battle of wits between Bruce and Lex was excellently done, and that *moment* that Bruce and Clark shared at the party was even better. That was it for me right there - they don't need words to express how well they go together, you know? Of course you know, hehe.
But even when our two heroes entered into a conversation, you handled it deftly - and way to bring up class the way you did. Is that the All-Star Superman nod? I've only read one issue, so I could be wrong. But seriously, it's very sweet. And heavy.
Amid all this, I LOVED how you stripped Bruce and had Clark checking himself out in the mirror: "He put one fist on his hip, admiring the way the suit hid the curve of his lats with an accommodating diagonal line" - innocent enough, but it still had me saying "Hell yeah." Is that what fangirl-ism is?
So in the end, I really liked this. It's not your usual fare, but it's still great.
12oksofiaAww, Duny, this is really sweet. And really heavy.
"They loved it when he was sociable" - right then and there, you set the tone for the whole story. It's all a charade for Bruce, it takes a toll on him, and the others of his set will "punish" him if he doesn't live up to social expectations. Very claws-out, monsters-behind-facade kind of thing. And totally tragic.
The battle of wits between Bruce and Lex was excellently done, and that *moment* that Bruce and Clark shared at the party was even better. That was it for me right there - they don't need words to express how well they go together, you know? Of course you know, hehe.
But even when our two heroes entered into a conversation, you handled it deftly - and way to bring up class the way you did. Is that the All-Star Superman nod? I've only read one issue, so I could be wrong. But seriously, it's very sweet. And heavy.
Amid all this, I LOVED how you stripped Bruce and had Clark checking himself out in the mirror: "He put one fist on his hip, admiring the way the suit hid the curve of his lats with an accommodating diagonal line" - innocent enough, but it still had me saying "Hell yeah." Is that what fangirl-ism is?
So in the end, I really liked this. It's not your usual fare, but it's still great.
9/18/2008 c1 Deiseach
*grinning like Cheshire cat*
Dear God, I love you, girl.
This was just what I needed to read. And I'm with Bruce on the matter of Luthor and is he redeemable - Lex needs to be dropped off Mount Everest without a saftey harness, then kicked into an active volcano when he lands.
I'm pretty sure shooting songbirds is illegal. And I'm pretty sure Luthor would be a member of a club that engaged in that kind of behaviour. Pah! He's neither subtle nor sophisticated; he's a petty thug with delusions of grandeur.
But this is a wonderful story - and we get Bruce in his underwear, to boot! :-)
*grinning like Cheshire cat*
Dear God, I love you, girl.
This was just what I needed to read. And I'm with Bruce on the matter of Luthor and is he redeemable - Lex needs to be dropped off Mount Everest without a saftey harness, then kicked into an active volcano when he lands.
I'm pretty sure shooting songbirds is illegal. And I'm pretty sure Luthor would be a member of a club that engaged in that kind of behaviour. Pah! He's neither subtle nor sophisticated; he's a petty thug with delusions of grandeur.
But this is a wonderful story - and we get Bruce in his underwear, to boot! :-)
9/18/2008 c1 3DeletedAccountKCS
Alfred is definitely one of the most endearingly longsuffering people in history. And he makes good cookies, evidently.
Some disgustingly vivid writing, that - I was cringing almost as much as Bruce was in that first part, I think. And for some reason I find the idea of Superman taking the suit up to high altitude just to get rid of the smell for the Bat simply adorable. :)
Great way to brighten my day - thanks!
3DeletedAccountKCSAlfred is definitely one of the most endearingly longsuffering people in history. And he makes good cookies, evidently.
Some disgustingly vivid writing, that - I was cringing almost as much as Bruce was in that first part, I think. And for some reason I find the idea of Superman taking the suit up to high altitude just to get rid of the smell for the Bat simply adorable. :)
Great way to brighten my day - thanks!