
6/14/2014 c5 Avatar Aang
Love it love it live it xxxxxxxxxxxxx more xxxxxx
Love it love it live it xxxxxxxxxxxxx more xxxxxx
8/20/2010 c1 Emily
This? PATHETIC? As if! I don't know where you got that idea from but this is one of best fics I've read. I mean seriously I've benn waiting a long time for this to be updated and eventually finished.
This? PATHETIC? As if! I don't know where you got that idea from but this is one of best fics I've read. I mean seriously I've benn waiting a long time for this to be updated and eventually finished.
4/28/2010 c3 Smile-I'mTheEndOfAllThatYouSee
I like this, and how you add the "missing instinct". Parents usually know what's wrong with their kid through instinct.
I like this, and how you add the "missing instinct". Parents usually know what's wrong with their kid through instinct.
4/28/2010 c1 Smile-I'mTheEndOfAllThatYouSee
I think you have an interseting idea going on.
I think you have an interseting idea going on.
5/31/2009 c5
3Puldoh
Wow, are you going to continue? I think its going along pretty well. How did Mikey react with leaving and going outside? Was he scared? Some people get scared about going outside and all when left inside for years. Anyway, what going to happen next? More please, I enjoyed this one alot. Its interesting.
Is Mikey I mean Subject 1 going to get better? Etc?
Lemme know

Wow, are you going to continue? I think its going along pretty well. How did Mikey react with leaving and going outside? Was he scared? Some people get scared about going outside and all when left inside for years. Anyway, what going to happen next? More please, I enjoyed this one alot. Its interesting.
Is Mikey I mean Subject 1 going to get better? Etc?
Lemme know
3/20/2009 c5
147Simone Robinson
awesome that you've updated. Are you really going to discontinue this story? if you are then can I carry on maybe?

awesome that you've updated. Are you really going to discontinue this story? if you are then can I carry on maybe?
3/15/2009 c5 Emily
OMG! Poor Mikey! I aslo feel really bad for whoever Bridges' daughter and wife are. I hope Mikey gets a chance to avenge his friends death. And I hope Donnie gets over his hatred or whatever it is he feeling towards Mikey right now soon. Because it is exactly those kinds of feeling Mikey doesn't need to be receiveing from his new family. I mean seriously Donatello even IF he's not your real brother I doubt he's a spy since it's pretty ovbious that he's never left that room in Stockman's lab in his whole life. And also the fact that he MIGHT not be your real brother doesn't change the fact that he's just as real of a PERSON as you are and therefore deserves to be treated like one. Love this story BTW! Please Update Soon.
OMG! Poor Mikey! I aslo feel really bad for whoever Bridges' daughter and wife are. I hope Mikey gets a chance to avenge his friends death. And I hope Donnie gets over his hatred or whatever it is he feeling towards Mikey right now soon. Because it is exactly those kinds of feeling Mikey doesn't need to be receiveing from his new family. I mean seriously Donatello even IF he's not your real brother I doubt he's a spy since it's pretty ovbious that he's never left that room in Stockman's lab in his whole life. And also the fact that he MIGHT not be your real brother doesn't change the fact that he's just as real of a PERSON as you are and therefore deserves to be treated like one. Love this story BTW! Please Update Soon.
3/2/2009 c4 lost
Auuww would you please update?
I really wanna know what happend!
Auuww would you please update?
I really wanna know what happend!
1/3/2009 c3
28PIRATEofHOGWARTS
DUDE
update soon i love this storie
i like that you left a cliffy for chap. 4
well i hate it to becasue it is a cliffy
UPDATE SOON
DUDE I LOVE IT

DUDE
update soon i love this storie
i like that you left a cliffy for chap. 4
well i hate it to becasue it is a cliffy
UPDATE SOON
DUDE I LOVE IT
12/17/2008 c4
16TheInflictedFinger
O_O GOOD STORY. PLEASE UPDATE.
I've never seen a TMNT fic like this and it looks so interesting! Please continue!

O_O GOOD STORY. PLEASE UPDATE.
I've never seen a TMNT fic like this and it looks so interesting! Please continue!