for Epligoue: A Burning Ending11/29/2009 c1 
2ILoveMormonBoys
Ooh, I liked that a lot! :) I would have read/reviewed this sooner, but we just read the book in English... So yeah. I liked it a lot, you did a great job with it! :)
2ILoveMormonBoysOoh, I liked that a lot! :) I would have read/reviewed this sooner, but we just read the book in English... So yeah. I liked it a lot, you did a great job with it! :)
9/28/2008 c1 NicoleCullen91
I personally liked it. We just finished reading this in English and I must say, it's nice to have closure. The whole bombing thing was a little too, i need to end this, but i loved the description and writing, it was very well done.
I personally liked it. We just finished reading this in English and I must say, it's nice to have closure. The whole bombing thing was a little too, i need to end this, but i loved the description and writing, it was very well done.
9/25/2008 c1 9DustyDreamer
Wow that was very good. You're a very lovely writer -i'll definately look out for some more of your stories :)
9DustyDreamerWow that was very good. You're a very lovely writer -i'll definately look out for some more of your stories :)
9/24/2008 c1 1tenkuchima
To be honest it wasnt very good. It seemed kinda like you were trying to cram as much long vocab words in there as you could, and it doesnt sound very natural. Its also highly unlikely that a) jack would kill the naval officer.
or b) someone would want to bomb a random island in the middle of nowhere, theres no point to it.
1tenkuchimaTo be honest it wasnt very good. It seemed kinda like you were trying to cram as much long vocab words in there as you could, and it doesnt sound very natural. Its also highly unlikely that a) jack would kill the naval officer.
or b) someone would want to bomb a random island in the middle of nowhere, theres no point to it.