for Copy of my heart11/12/2008 c1 
4Your Valensi
I've only read the first book in the 'A Great and Terrible Beauty' series, so I'm not sure if Gemma and Kartik end up together.
After reading this poem, I hope they do!
I love the simplicity in your poetry; when I'm jotting one down, I focus on big words with infinite meanings, so much that I end up losing the meaning of the poem itself.
I like your poetry, though. It's straight and simple and it doesn't cause you to run off track. And I think that shows a lot of potential :)
By the way, I read that you're doing NaNoWriMo on your profile. Let's be novel buddies on there, too! :D
Add me- my username is aisha-stargirl
With the hyphen thing too and what not ;)
4Your ValensiI've only read the first book in the 'A Great and Terrible Beauty' series, so I'm not sure if Gemma and Kartik end up together.
After reading this poem, I hope they do!
I love the simplicity in your poetry; when I'm jotting one down, I focus on big words with infinite meanings, so much that I end up losing the meaning of the poem itself.
I like your poetry, though. It's straight and simple and it doesn't cause you to run off track. And I think that shows a lot of potential :)
By the way, I read that you're doing NaNoWriMo on your profile. Let's be novel buddies on there, too! :D
Add me- my username is aisha-stargirl
With the hyphen thing too and what not ;)