
3/20/2011 c1
20Mrs Hatake Itachi
lots of grammar mistake, sometimes it makes it hard to understand your point. but keep on writting and doing your best.)

lots of grammar mistake, sometimes it makes it hard to understand your point. but keep on writting and doing your best.)
3/7/2011 c1 Lily Quinn
really loved it! the way the story went smoothly, the interesting plot, the natural act of the characters. only the error-grammar here and there (hope I can help u beta-read it. i can't write a story, but i guess i'm really good at finding mistakes). but u really do have talent. why do u stop posting? it's such a waste. i really wanna read your other story _"
really loved it! the way the story went smoothly, the interesting plot, the natural act of the characters. only the error-grammar here and there (hope I can help u beta-read it. i can't write a story, but i guess i'm really good at finding mistakes). but u really do have talent. why do u stop posting? it's such a waste. i really wanna read your other story _"
6/3/2009 c1 Weissfreya
WOW! that's sweet! i mean - i like the situation! really! wimpy yuri... and i like that wolfram still says 'yuri' hiding his hurt pride when the engagement was broken...
WOW! that's sweet! i mean - i like the situation! really! wimpy yuri... and i like that wolfram still says 'yuri' hiding his hurt pride when the engagement was broken...
9/27/2008 c1
14eclst
Finally I read this! xD I must say I loved it! Seen Yuuri jealous was good too lol

Finally I read this! xD I must say I loved it! Seen Yuuri jealous was good too lol
9/25/2008 c1
17Yuuram88
This was quite a long story, but it was really cute and sweet. Poor Wolfram always getting hurt by Yuuri's carelessness. Anyways, this was a very nice story. However, maybe getting a beta-reader to edit your work will make your story even more engaging but all the same I still like and it's good that you took the chance to get this story out. Keep doing what you're doing and in time you'll get comfortable with writing and all that comes with it XD!

This was quite a long story, but it was really cute and sweet. Poor Wolfram always getting hurt by Yuuri's carelessness. Anyways, this was a very nice story. However, maybe getting a beta-reader to edit your work will make your story even more engaging but all the same I still like and it's good that you took the chance to get this story out. Keep doing what you're doing and in time you'll get comfortable with writing and all that comes with it XD!
9/25/2008 c1
2Remsy Black
TuT Nice fic... it make me cry when Wolfram was singing to Greta T.T (Im on this day of the month xD)
hihihi is nice to see Jealous!Yuuri hihihi
Congratulations n_n

TuT Nice fic... it make me cry when Wolfram was singing to Greta T.T (Im on this day of the month xD)
hihihi is nice to see Jealous!Yuuri hihihi
Congratulations n_n