for Charming Life12/13/2009 c1 
136Random Dice
Oh, I liked it!
I think the first person did make it better, cause I tried re-reading it after in third and it didn't work as well...
Keep writing!
Spike
136Random DiceOh, I liked it!
I think the first person did make it better, cause I tried re-reading it after in third and it didn't work as well...
Keep writing!
Spike
10/29/2008 c1 27Iglika
Oh, I enjoyed reading this story too, despite the fact that I’m not familiar with “Bones” as well. I love stories which are focused on people’s feelings and I like the way you are following and discovering to us, the readers, the feelings of this character. And I think you did a great job by writing in first person and in present tense!
27IglikaOh, I enjoyed reading this story too, despite the fact that I’m not familiar with “Bones” as well. I love stories which are focused on people’s feelings and I like the way you are following and discovering to us, the readers, the feelings of this character. And I think you did a great job by writing in first person and in present tense!
10/12/2008 c1 35chrysalis escapist
I liked it, and I think it did work very well.
I loved Brennan's thoughts about what Booth means to her and her not quite ability to grasp it because it's so new to her. My favorite bits were that she now has a purpose, the thoughts about her heart, and that before she would have been in denial mode, oh yeah, indeed :).
35chrysalis escapistI liked it, and I think it did work very well.
I loved Brennan's thoughts about what Booth means to her and her not quite ability to grasp it because it's so new to her. My favorite bits were that she now has a purpose, the thoughts about her heart, and that before she would have been in denial mode, oh yeah, indeed :).
9/28/2008 c1 30CupcakeBean
I liked this story a lot. I always like getting inside the characters' heads and you did a nice job with it. :)
30CupcakeBeanI liked this story a lot. I always like getting inside the characters' heads and you did a nice job with it. :)
9/25/2008 c1 35TheLifeILive
That is really sweet and I think you articulated her feelings very well. I wish she'd come to there realizations on the show though. I think she's still firmly in denial. I mean, she didn't even bat an eye when she told Booth she assumed he was sexually active. The woman should be sick with jealousy at the thought of Booth with someone else! Sorry...kinda went all squirrely on you.
"It’s like there’s this deep, overwhelming desire to be more for him than I ever was for myself. " That's an adorable line, very well put.
Great job!
Leah
35TheLifeILiveThat is really sweet and I think you articulated her feelings very well. I wish she'd come to there realizations on the show though. I think she's still firmly in denial. I mean, she didn't even bat an eye when she told Booth she assumed he was sexually active. The woman should be sick with jealousy at the thought of Booth with someone else! Sorry...kinda went all squirrely on you.
"It’s like there’s this deep, overwhelming desire to be more for him than I ever was for myself. " That's an adorable line, very well put.
Great job!
Leah