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1/24/2018 c11 HoneyBear84
Loved it
9/15/2016 c11 alinefgs
Adorei essa fic bjs
3/12/2015 c11 Wishfull-star
that was a lovely story thank you for writing it:)
2/8/2015 c11 thewolf74
I really like this story. It was just as good a the other one.
1/19/2014 c11 6Kitty Savella
While I thoroughly enjoyed your story line, I had trouble understanding much of it without an additional read, as your spelling and grammar were terribly off. So, my questions are thus: did you use a beta reader, and is English your first language? If the answer is no to either question, I highly recommend using a good beta reader and revising the story. If the answer is yes to either our both questions, you still need to get a good beta reader, as technically this story violates the terms and guidelines as set forth by the site. You are required to use as many resources as viably possible to make sure the story is as correct as possible.

Please not that I am not flaming, as I did actually enjoy the read. However, it is my duty as a fellow author and a reader, to help and inform those who need help and information.
3/20/2013 c11 xDarklightx
I like it.
7/25/2011 c11 50MalfoySnapeHeiress
awww very sweet!
7/13/2011 c1 Kage 5243
12/31/2010 c11 3Kimkrys
IT was great.
12/18/2010 c11 1goodguy4u282008
wonderful story loved it
12/17/2010 c11 2Blue-Eyed Chica
12/13/2010 c11 6Rika100
I definetly agree with the ending. Great job on this one and the previous one. ^_^
11/7/2010 c11 61Stormshadow13
Really cool fic! Loved it!
11/5/2010 c11 EmmaRandomAs
love it! a fitting end to an amazing story. congrats on a job well done!
7/12/2010 c11 wandamarie
wow it was a great story thanks
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