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10/25/2011 c1 DeathKiller
That was awsome just awsome.But MAKE UP SEX! WTF! Oh and SASUKE RAPIN NARUTO! Thats just SOO GAY MAN!Its like my eyes went like
5/15/2011 c1 9Haru Inuzuka
-giggling head off- This was silly, sad, happy...and you REALLY made me want to kill Sasuke. Raping Naruto? The nerve! DX Love that Naruto and Ino are like twins, that they turned into demons, and I love the pairings! But, what kind of demons did they turn into? Foxes? O.o All-n-all: YAY randomness~! XD -stares at Super-Sweet- Ummm, person? WHO CARES? Its HUMOR! Geez... XP
8/21/2009 c1 7Myra the Dovahkiin
Great story. Really loved it. What kind of demons were Ino & Naruto anyway and why did he attack?
7/19/2009 c1 4ichigofan01
lol, i liked that, alot! u should do more like that and more PeinXnaru (theres not enough)
6/23/2009 c1 foxykitsuneyouko
awesome start please update as soon as you can i cant wait to see what happens next.
2/7/2009 c1 animedude1491
=[], well then, that was actually pretty funny XD keep doing what your doing ^^
9/28/2008 c1 Super-Sweet
I absolutely hate it when people go in summaries 'oh, it's better on the inside' usually without the correct PUNCTUATION, forgetting people have CAPITAL LETTERS AT THE START OF THEIR NAMES. Also, the random rape by Sasuke - what the hell is up with that? Random insert bad situation here, which clearly you do not understand the trauma of for people who have actually been raped. Changing Naruto's style completely, that takes away part of his character. There were also spelling mistakes, and grammatical errors - sentences do not start with and, it is a connecting word. Orochimaru was even out of character. Orochimaru paled? He does not show fear. Have you never read the manga? He would just be angry, and he can match with the kyuubi anyway. Like he would be scared of a group he has clearly never heard of before that moment. Also, he grew up with Tsunade and fought her before. What makes you think that he would be scared of the super-strength of Ino, or that he would be killed in FIVE MINUTES? On top of this, Naruto giggling? Men don't GIGGLE. They laugh or chortle, they are not girls. They 20 ROOT ANBU did not need to be italicised. Random bold lettering. Completely terrible description - bite and SQUISH the ANBU? What are you, ten years old? Make up sex? Random coupling, and Tsunade's just going to accept this? Neither of them would ever abandon their villages without good reason, and these reasons of 'they'd make a good couple although we're trying to KILL all the DEMON VESSELS to take their power.'

Oh yes, this story COMPLETELY MAKES SENSE.
9/26/2008 c1 157deathrosekitty
Hahahaha. I loved that!
9/26/2008 c1 16Lady Luv of the East
oh its god nice work^^ hahaha luv it

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