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4/30/2009 c18 Gandalf the White Edelweiss
i like it
4/30/2009 c18 3The Perks of Being Ashley
omg omg!
4/30/2009 c18 0204
Dear WRiter,

I love your writing, but I think I will agree, that it does seem a bit rushed. I missed the flare you usually put into your work. Don't feel that you have to update at a certain point if you don't want to, or haven't had one of those eureka moments for your next chapters. Trust me. I know from experience. It was nice to read this chapter, but next time, I look forward to seeing more of your own individual writings and Cedric's POV. Keep up the writing, and update again soon! WTYL.
4/30/2009 c18 18hansbmd
Ooh, Hermione has a tail! They did a really good job with that scene in the movie of Chamber of Secrets. I can't wait to see how Cedric reacts when he sees her. I can already see it in my mind. He like the rest of the school automatically assumes she's been attacked and goes up to the hospital wing to see her, but finds instead her with a furry face and tail. But you're the one writing the story not me. By the way, Cedric was the one that sent her Pride and Prejudice, wasn't he? It couldn't have been her parents, they'd have put their name to it. And he wouldn't have because right now they aren't speaking. It must have been him. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please post back as quickly as you possibly can!
4/30/2009 c18 612yellow 14
Slightly rushed, but still fairly good. Good luck with your exams and keep updating
4/15/2009 c17 1Red red red ribbon
wow love it update soon!
4/12/2009 c17 3Live.Laugh.Love.Forever
omg i cant wait for the next chapter. i cant belive they think harry is doing all this. it makes me mad even though this doesnt happen in real life :0
4/11/2009 c17 3Aly123654
Amazing, one of the best stories I've read and I only favorite the best and yours qualifys! I love it! update soon please! =)
4/4/2009 c17 Gandalf the White Edelweiss
hm.
4/4/2009 c16 Gandalf the White Edelweiss
hm
4/4/2009 c14 Gandalf the White Edelweiss
aw :)
4/4/2009 c13 Gandalf the White Edelweiss
what did he think?
4/4/2009 c10 Gandalf the White Edelweiss
*growl* if it is who i think it is then let all things powerful stike her down...
3/26/2009 c17 ChelsieMarie
Great story! Can't wait for the next update. Hope its soon :)
3/23/2009 c17 612yellow 14
So, you get bored easily? Glad you haven't gotten bored with this. The next chapter will be tough for Hermione I'm betting. Keep updating
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