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3/22/2009 c17 Mwhahahaha18
nice update, i can't wait to read more.
3/22/2009 c17 14crazedchick
Another amazing chapter. Poor Hermione...she's caught in the middle of Cedric and Harry and that can't be good for her. I also feel sorry for Harry as he already has enough problems without this.

I can't wait to see what happens between Hermione and Cedric next so please update more soon.
3/22/2009 c17 1CFCRockAngel
OMG - poor cedric! Im sure he is going to be really worried about Hermione! I hope he figures out that its not harry soon! ^.^

I think the story is flowing very nicely :-) I think you did a very good job on this chapter :-)

In the next few chapters, i just dont want their relationship to be destroyed! I love hermy and ced :-) Maybe some lip action? LOL
3/22/2009 c17 18hansbmd
I think you're doing a great job with this story! I didn't much like the second book because of what the Hufflepuffs and everyone else all thought of Harry. Even some of his fellow Gryffindors thought so. I hated that! But I love this story! I can't wait for the next one. Please don't get bored with the story. I want you to keep writing. I really want to get to the part where Hermione gets petrified, just so I can see Cedric's reaction. You have to keep going, you just have to!
3/22/2009 c17 0204
Dear Writer,

I am sorry to say that I concur with you when you say this isn't your best. However, I do think, as seen in your previous chapters, that you can write a lot better. Don't worry though, I just published a chapter that I didn't particularly think was brilliant too. Every great writer has a chapter or two that isn't the best. To say a little suggestion, maybe you could incorporate some new events in the old one from the story? Just a suggestion. You don't have to take it, your writing and story so far has been most intriguing. I think it's interesting to see the story from the POV of someone else besides Harry. Keep up the great writing, I look forward to your next update!
3/22/2009 c17 7Brunhilda38
ah this was such a good chapter...can't wait for more
3/11/2009 c16 Brunhilda38
nice chapter
3/11/2009 c16 1CFCRockAngel
Short and sweet ^.^

Great job - really well written!

Keep it coming! :-)
3/8/2009 c16 Mwhahahaha18
Nice update...can't wait to read more.
3/8/2009 c16 18hansbmd
This is going to be a long hard year for our favorite trio. I never liked Chamber of Secrets much, everyone just took for granted that Harry was the Heir of Slytherin and wouldn't trust him. But I like your spin on it, Cedric's perspective, then Hermione's. I'm guessing the next chapter is going to be them talking to each other about this whole thing, and I'm also guessing that the Polyjuice Potion is going to be at least mentioned. Update soon so I can find out!
3/8/2009 c16 614yellow 14
An interesting chapter. You've clearly given this some thought. Good luck with your exams and keep updating
3/8/2009 c16 0204
Dear Writer,

The chapter was good, but I missed your individual writing skill and technique in this chapter. I liked it but, here's just a small suggestion. Next time you use a scene from the book, try and make it yours by using different wording, or add in an event or something like that. Anyway, I look forward to your next chapter. Keep writing.
2/20/2009 c11 0204
Dear Writer,

I am EXTREMELY impressed with your story and writing style! This is an incredible piece of work! Please update soon!
2/17/2009 c15 14crazedchick
Wow what a chapter. Please update more soon.
2/14/2009 c15 1CFCRockAngel
OMG! Great chapter yet again ^ ^

Aw crap - i hope everything is not ruined between hermione and cedric - i really like them together! Make up soon, guys! lol 8D

AwEsOmE jOb xx
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