10/5/2008 c5 15theghettocyborg
So far it's a fun read. I'm curious about what's going to happen next. I'm assuming that the creature Captain Davies rescued grew up to be the thing that busted up the MA BPRD facility.
So far it's a fun read. I'm curious about what's going to happen next. I'm assuming that the creature Captain Davies rescued grew up to be the thing that busted up the MA BPRD facility.
10/2/2008 c4 1igbogal
Poor Hellboy! Not only does he get hauled off to a jail cell for something he didn't do, but he has to ride there in a plane constructed from rust and chicken wire. Kate has it tough too, being in the uncomfortable position of his friend AND supervisor. I'd love to see how things go for both of them, and for the rest of the gang!
Poor Hellboy! Not only does he get hauled off to a jail cell for something he didn't do, but he has to ride there in a plane constructed from rust and chicken wire. Kate has it tough too, being in the uncomfortable position of his friend AND supervisor. I'd love to see how things go for both of them, and for the rest of the gang!
9/29/2008 c3 igbogal
Oh, this is good. Really good. Like, 'Why can't they put THIS on the screen' good. Your writing style is polished without being pretentious, and the plot has a gritty, sci-fi feel. Now that Hellboy and Co. have saved the day, why on earth is he being detained? I hope you won't let us wait too long to find out! The physical appearance of the characters seem to be taken from the animated series or the comics rather than the Hellboy movies - are they?
Oh, this is good. Really good. Like, 'Why can't they put THIS on the screen' good. Your writing style is polished without being pretentious, and the plot has a gritty, sci-fi feel. Now that Hellboy and Co. have saved the day, why on earth is he being detained? I hope you won't let us wait too long to find out! The physical appearance of the characters seem to be taken from the animated series or the comics rather than the Hellboy movies - are they?