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10/26/2019 c1 derektomlinson
lol a cowering afraid sayianman backing away from his wife with the rusty spoon saying videl could you put the spoon down please let's not do anything you will regret later videl hissing saying that to her husband sayianman no i will not put the rusty spoon down i meant what i had said in the delivery room i am going to use the spoof to cit your balls off sayianman saying to his wife oh look at the time i just remembered that i forgot something at my parents house got to go bye videl hissing at sayianman son gohan you get back here now and let me cut your balls off don't let me have to chase my cowardly husband to my in laws house and case ate you there is that WHAT YOU WANT FOR YOUR PARENTS TO SEE THEIR DAUGHTER IN LAW ABOUT TO CUT THEIR SON S BALLS OFF WITH A RUSTY SPOON
5/5/2019 c1 Derek
Lol gohan to videl you have to catch me first
9/24/2018 c1 Cp125
that a took a turn real quick. this was hilarious
2/1/2016 c1 1gabelou1991
J'aime.
7/12/2013 c1 rebmul8
O.O lmfao
3/25/2012 c1 71great gospel
This was both hilarious and adorable. I loved their little banters throughout the story. This was absolutely perfect. Well done.

sora
10/10/2011 c1 3yellowpinkgirl19
i love the "im going to rip your dick off with a rusty spoon when this baby is born" i laughed when i read this
12/22/2009 c1 2Itachi's apprentice
ā€œIā€™m still going to rip your dick off.ā€

Well at least we know why Pan is an only child. Great work.
8/18/2009 c1 7gizmo-gal
Lol. This is the first story I've ever read for G/Videl and I have to admit it was funny. No offense, but I dont care for Videl's character at all. *sigh* but I'm getting back into DBZ Fandom and trying to expand my character horizons so I'm glad that your story is here to break me in.
6/10/2009 c1 michael
rip your dick off? wow ... no comment
3/13/2009 c1 17hippiechic
Lmao! Smart boy, Gohan! That's right! When your wife is complaining about your mother, just keep your mouth shut! Lol. That is wisdom since no matter what you say, you will only find yourself in more and more trouble. Lol.

Now, the real reason Chi-Chi signed them up for classes comes through. She can't watch over them all the time, so she signed them up for a class where someone who was just like her could watch over them for at least part of the time. Lol. Smooth move! xD

You know, oddly enough, I have always thought a spoon would be the best way to remove a man's member. It just sounds like the most painful way possible. I love how Videl seemed to catch on to that thought. Sadistic little girl. Lol.

Awesome! I love the ending! That cracked me up! I'll be good and won't ruin it for the others, but nicely wrapped up. Lol.

Peace and Out! ~mar

PS - I can't believe you have me reading Gohan/Videl fics. -_- Lol.
1/12/2009 c1 9Furiael
Oh my! Poor Gohan!

Wonderful fic!

I see that Gohan learned so much about women. They're so posesive, so volatile, so lovely at the same time... (why am I saying 'they' if I'm a woman!)

Wonderful experience for the Son couple.
1/2/2009 c1 Dr. Trunks Briefs
Oh, Videl, how we love you. Maybe I should use that threat when I have children. Natural way... *shudder*
11/17/2008 c1 6Tanja88
sweet and funny,

Love,

Tanja
11/13/2008 c1 NekoUrsula
Hahaha. this provides a very simple explanation as to why gohan only had one child :P

ingenious piece of writing!

good job :)
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