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7/28/2023 c51 Charmfeather
This was one of the best fanfiction stories I have ever read, I loved every part of it. Thank you so much for all of the time, love, and care you put into it over the years.
7/27/2023 c20 phoebehals
I cant help but notice that while the elements and story telling is superb, you use a lot of ‘had’ with -ed. For example ‘Zuko and Katara had lingered on the dance floor and Katara had taught Zuko the Water Tribe dance that followed.’ It can be snipped to ‘Zuko and Katara lingered on the dance floor and Katara taught Zuko the Water Tribe dance that followed.’ Use your ‘had’s sparsely. May I suggest reading Writing Tools by Roy Peter Clark and On Writing Well by William Zinsser. These books helped me a lot in reading and writing fan fics. I started writing fics but they’re still rough drafts because I jump from one fic to another depending on my interests lol…
4/3/2023 c27 PinkPineapples
Man I love how you write Toph, Uncle Iroh... everyone!
4/3/2023 c23 PinkPineapples
Whaa? That guy is from the White Lotus?
4/3/2023 c22 PinkPineapples
Not happy with Zuko here... they are dating other people.
4/3/2023 c21 PinkPineapples
Oh my gosh Zuko... you did cover yourself in honey! hahaha
4/3/2023 c20 PinkPineapples
I loved reading this from Hakoda's perspective, what a good dad he is.
4/3/2023 c19 PinkPineapples
Wow, great chapter!
4/3/2023 c18 PinkPineapples
Lovely chapter, as always.
4/1/2023 c17 PinkPineapples
Yeah firebending style!
4/1/2023 c16 PinkPineapples
My heart straight up melted... so touching.
4/1/2023 c15 PinkPineapples
Stunning, you are a stunning writer. I'm breathless.
4/1/2023 c14 PinkPineapples
Yes, go Hakoda!
4/1/2023 c13 PinkPineapples
Oh my, Katara is perceptive.
4/1/2023 c12 PinkPineapples
I love this story so much. Your writing is just beautiful!
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