for Fall of the White Lotus11/15/2008 c10 Kagome1235
great chapter!
I really liked the storyline with the White Lotus.
Please update soon!
great chapter!
I really liked the storyline with the White Lotus.
Please update soon!
11/7/2008 c9 ErasePlease
This is a really wonderful and layered story and I look forward to reading more of it! Thanks for sharing!
This is a really wonderful and layered story and I look forward to reading more of it! Thanks for sharing!
11/7/2008 c9 xyzisme
I think Ursa is the spirit princess...just a guess! This story is brilliant and deserves much more attention. Just keep updating!
I think Ursa is the spirit princess...just a guess! This story is brilliant and deserves much more attention. Just keep updating!
11/1/2008 c8 
2Flaming Falcon
NO! those evil people zukos awsum how could they not let him visit
great writing
cant wait 4 the next chap
2Flaming FalconNO! those evil people zukos awsum how could they not let him visit
great writing
cant wait 4 the next chap
10/30/2008 c8 7xyzisme
I like Zuko's second meeting with Lee. But his parents...hmm. Waiting for the next bit, keep up the good work! And I like the giving of music to go with the story, keep that up too. :)
7xyzismeI like Zuko's second meeting with Lee. But his parents...hmm. Waiting for the next bit, keep up the good work! And I like the giving of music to go with the story, keep that up too. :)
10/30/2008 c8 watercrab
A lot of writers (including me!) don't reunite Zuko with Lee. You did a great job of making this reunion wonderful! Zuko's uneasiness in returning and Lee's excitiment was perfect and your explaination on why Zuko taught Lee to swordfight made a lot of sense.
Please update soon!
A lot of writers (including me!) don't reunite Zuko with Lee. You did a great job of making this reunion wonderful! Zuko's uneasiness in returning and Lee's excitiment was perfect and your explaination on why Zuko taught Lee to swordfight made a lot of sense.
Please update soon!
10/26/2008 c7 17Strata's Stargazer
Really excited about how the story is developing and looking forward to see how the next chapter is going to go with Zuko being confronted with his past again. Hope to see the next chapter soon!
17Strata's StargazerReally excited about how the story is developing and looking forward to see how the next chapter is going to go with Zuko being confronted with his past again. Hope to see the next chapter soon!
10/25/2008 c1 ramirez
Really like the plot.I read the whole fic from chapter 1 all the way to chapter 7 without stopping. Love the attention to the details, be it the geographic aspects or the character protrayal. Do update soon. Great Job!
Really like the plot.I read the whole fic from chapter 1 all the way to chapter 7 without stopping. Love the attention to the details, be it the geographic aspects or the character protrayal. Do update soon. Great Job!
10/22/2008 c7 Ava22
Wow! Absolutely amazing! I cannot believe I haven't found this story ealier; I've been looking for a fic like this ever since the series finale. Can't believe you've only had 6 reviews so far. It deserves many, many more of them.
I love the detailed way in which you write. Surroundings, thoughts, and characters come to life this way and it really sucked me into this story. You stay very close to the original series, first with the characters; they are very much IN character and it's truly nice to read a story in which Zuko and Katara start off from where they were left after sozin's comet and see them slowly and realistically grow to each other in stead of so many other stories in which they meet each other after so many years, have an epiphany out of nowhere and start making out. Those fics don't work for me, they don't get to the essence of what I like so much about Zuko and Katara. Your story does. In my opinion the two of them are completing each other in many more ways then that they simply look nice together. You let them talk together, discover each others secrets, find out how much they are alike, and at the same time you manage to keep the plot going. So far, it never got boring, or too outstretched, but simply a very, very nice read.
I'm impressed you're staying so faithful to locations too. I've never checked any Avatar map so I wouldn't even have noticed Taku would be impossible for them to reach, but again, so much eye for detail!
Keep up the good work, I sincerely hope you'll continue writing on this, and it's definately going to be in my Story Alert list. Hope to read a new update soon!
Ava
Wow! Absolutely amazing! I cannot believe I haven't found this story ealier; I've been looking for a fic like this ever since the series finale. Can't believe you've only had 6 reviews so far. It deserves many, many more of them.
I love the detailed way in which you write. Surroundings, thoughts, and characters come to life this way and it really sucked me into this story. You stay very close to the original series, first with the characters; they are very much IN character and it's truly nice to read a story in which Zuko and Katara start off from where they were left after sozin's comet and see them slowly and realistically grow to each other in stead of so many other stories in which they meet each other after so many years, have an epiphany out of nowhere and start making out. Those fics don't work for me, they don't get to the essence of what I like so much about Zuko and Katara. Your story does. In my opinion the two of them are completing each other in many more ways then that they simply look nice together. You let them talk together, discover each others secrets, find out how much they are alike, and at the same time you manage to keep the plot going. So far, it never got boring, or too outstretched, but simply a very, very nice read.
I'm impressed you're staying so faithful to locations too. I've never checked any Avatar map so I wouldn't even have noticed Taku would be impossible for them to reach, but again, so much eye for detail!
Keep up the good work, I sincerely hope you'll continue writing on this, and it's definately going to be in my Story Alert list. Hope to read a new update soon!
Ava
10/19/2008 c6 Strata's Stargazer
Oh...more twists appear as the plot thickens! Um...there were a few grammatical errors (send vs. sent, stuff like that). Just thought I would let you know as a heads up for the next chapter!
Oh...more twists appear as the plot thickens! Um...there were a few grammatical errors (send vs. sent, stuff like that). Just thought I would let you know as a heads up for the next chapter!
10/12/2008 c5 watercrab
That was a good idea to incorporate the northern/southern lights and Zuko's inner fire. I don't think anyone used that idea.
This story is becoming interesting! I wonder what Iroh meant when the fate of the White Lotus falls on Katara and Zuko. I have a couple of ideas but I have been wrong before!
Great chapter and update soon!
That was a good idea to incorporate the northern/southern lights and Zuko's inner fire. I don't think anyone used that idea.
This story is becoming interesting! I wonder what Iroh meant when the fate of the White Lotus falls on Katara and Zuko. I have a couple of ideas but I have been wrong before!
Great chapter and update soon!
10/12/2008 c5 Thornwitch
Cool. I love Bumi and his idea of hazing. Um, what about the Fire Nation? Surely Zuko can't just take off without doing some kind of very public powere hand-off to a regent without people thinking there's been a coup...
Cool. I love Bumi and his idea of hazing. Um, what about the Fire Nation? Surely Zuko can't just take off without doing some kind of very public powere hand-off to a regent without people thinking there's been a coup...
10/11/2008 c5 5Kagome1235
This is an amazing story!
I admire the plot, and all of the connections that are fact within the show.
Great job, I hope to see more.
Please update.
5Kagome1235This is an amazing story!
I admire the plot, and all of the connections that are fact within the show.
Great job, I hope to see more.
Please update.