for Far Away12/2/2008 c11 
2ElectroGreeness
I liked this chapter
It wasnt too
OMG that went too far
or
This is boring kinda thing
It was PERFECT
well done.
I'll be waiting for a new chapter soon.
2ElectroGreenessI liked this chapter
It wasnt too
OMG that went too far
or
This is boring kinda thing
It was PERFECT
well done.
I'll be waiting for a new chapter soon.
12/2/2008 c11 1Avalon83
that was good i hope u dont have there kid in it atleast not in this story. that is my idea i didnt really like there kid it was weird but again that is my idea, i cant wait for the next chapter
1Avalon83that was good i hope u dont have there kid in it atleast not in this story. that is my idea i didnt really like there kid it was weird but again that is my idea, i cant wait for the next chapter
11/20/2008 c10 5Sabyn1993
This is the most amazing fanfiction I've ever read! To have Edward's point of view is simply heaven. I don't have words to express what I feel at this moment, it is truely magnificent. If feel that my heart it about to burst through my chest. This is so good. I hope you will write other fanfiction like that because you have a real talent. Thank you for all this! It is PERFECT.
5Sabyn1993This is the most amazing fanfiction I've ever read! To have Edward's point of view is simply heaven. I don't have words to express what I feel at this moment, it is truely magnificent. If feel that my heart it about to burst through my chest. This is so good. I hope you will write other fanfiction like that because you have a real talent. Thank you for all this! It is PERFECT.
11/16/2008 c10 Chris
This was so beautiful! *tear* I like that Aro crashed the wedding more than Jacob but I do like that he was there and didn't interact with Bella. For Bella everything was perfect. With the exception of like 2 bumps it was purr-fect for Edward to. Mr and Mrs. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen. It is a wonderful feeling to finally be able to call yourself Mrs. I know.
This was so beautiful! *tear* I like that Aro crashed the wedding more than Jacob but I do like that he was there and didn't interact with Bella. For Bella everything was perfect. With the exception of like 2 bumps it was purr-fect for Edward to. Mr and Mrs. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen. It is a wonderful feeling to finally be able to call yourself Mrs. I know.
11/16/2008 c10 5Sea of Topaz
i love how you put whole conversations from the book in your story. you use the convos well.
best of luck and please update soon
sea of topaz
5Sea of Topazi love how you put whole conversations from the book in your story. you use the convos well.
best of luck and please update soon
sea of topaz
11/3/2008 c9 Tanya Gill
This chapter u wrote is the best I have read...plz add the nxt chpt soon I can't wait and out of the whole book the Jake part was the best...
This chapter u wrote is the best I have read...plz add the nxt chpt soon I can't wait and out of the whole book the Jake part was the best...
11/3/2008 c7 5lions-lamb-4ever
I love the outcome of this story! You are an amazing writer. Although it got a little repetitive towards the end. That may just be because I have read the book SO many times.
5lions-lamb-4everI love the outcome of this story! You are an amazing writer. Although it got a little repetitive towards the end. That may just be because I have read the book SO many times.
11/3/2008 c1 1NinjaVampPirate with 5 roses
just found this story,
and i think it's pretty interesting =D
5/5 stars
just found this story,
and i think it's pretty interesting =D
5/5 stars
10/27/2008 c3 5snevans78
hey,
i love it! i really like your take on edward's POV - it actually feels like him in midnight sun, unlike most stories! i was team switzerland until i read midnight sun - before i thought edward didn't really have that much of a character - but now i absolutely love him! and i'm not going to lie, my regard for jacob vanished as soon as he imprinted on stupid renesmee.
and OMG when i read the summary of this story i was like "wow this sounds like a lot of my daydreams!" (i often try to imagine edward giving in at certain parts of the story. usually i imagine edward coming in the room, hiding in her closet once he hears jacob coming and waches their whole conversation. but i have a really bad imagination! i'm sure you'll do a better job than i do...
5snevans78hey,
i love it! i really like your take on edward's POV - it actually feels like him in midnight sun, unlike most stories! i was team switzerland until i read midnight sun - before i thought edward didn't really have that much of a character - but now i absolutely love him! and i'm not going to lie, my regard for jacob vanished as soon as he imprinted on stupid renesmee.
and OMG when i read the summary of this story i was like "wow this sounds like a lot of my daydreams!" (i often try to imagine edward giving in at certain parts of the story. usually i imagine edward coming in the room, hiding in her closet once he hears jacob coming and waches their whole conversation. but i have a really bad imagination! i'm sure you'll do a better job than i do...
10/27/2008 c8 2ElectroGreeness
FREAKING AMAZING
OMG
Keep going.
Cause its soo enjoyable!
Thankyou, you just saved my boring afternoon.
2ElectroGreenessFREAKING AMAZING
OMG
Keep going.
Cause its soo enjoyable!
Thankyou, you just saved my boring afternoon.