for Far Away5/13/2014 c13 
24Camilla10
I tend to get irritated by authors starting new stories without completing the one they are writing. Plots are a dime a dozen - the real issue is to bring them to completion. Discipline, please! I have written 20 fics and never started posting before I had it all drafted.
I am saying this because I notice that you started this one in 2008. Does it makes sense for me to continue reading when there is a chance it will never be completed?
24Camilla10I tend to get irritated by authors starting new stories without completing the one they are writing. Plots are a dime a dozen - the real issue is to bring them to completion. Discipline, please! I have written 20 fics and never started posting before I had it all drafted.
I am saying this because I notice that you started this one in 2008. Does it makes sense for me to continue reading when there is a chance it will never be completed?
5/8/2014 c5 Camilla10
Alice can't see the wolves. You might want to amend the sentenc e when she says she saw a wolf coming and give another reason.
Alice can't see the wolves. You might want to amend the sentenc e when she says she saw a wolf coming and give another reason.
2/23/2014 c1 ladeerelli
Hmmm, a little disappointed as I usually don't start a story unless it's completed ; my fault I guess. I hope you decide to finish the story. I was enjoying it. Would love to know how it ends. Looks like you only need a few chapters to do so too.
Hmmm, a little disappointed as I usually don't start a story unless it's completed ; my fault I guess. I hope you decide to finish the story. I was enjoying it. Would love to know how it ends. Looks like you only need a few chapters to do so too.
2/14/2014 c19 stephi910
when I saw this story in my inbox, I couldn't remember it at all...so I went back and read it...love this story! can't wait for the next update...and still kinda dying to know what's going on with Jacob...hope u update again soon!
when I saw this story in my inbox, I couldn't remember it at all...so I went back and read it...love this story! can't wait for the next update...and still kinda dying to know what's going on with Jacob...hope u update again soon!
2/1/2014 c18 babesbraves
I know it's been 3 years from the last update but please think about finishing this fantastic book!
I know it's been 3 years from the last update but please think about finishing this fantastic book!
12/29/2012 c11 kriscrable
I LOVE LOVE LOVEEEEE THE HOST! Ian ROCKS! I like how you took them to Chicago it was cute :)
I LOVE LOVE LOVEEEEE THE HOST! Ian ROCKS! I like how you took them to Chicago it was cute :)