
10/3/2008 c2 kiela
aw that is such a cute story! please dont end it though because i really love it! just please continue for the sake of my sanity lol
aw that is such a cute story! please dont end it though because i really love it! just please continue for the sake of my sanity lol
10/2/2008 c2
19JAMonMyToast
Aw. I loved the little vision's Pam had, about the little boy and the teenage girl. Adorable. Keep it coming.

Aw. I loved the little vision's Pam had, about the little boy and the teenage girl. Adorable. Keep it coming.
9/30/2008 c2
5bingbangboom714
Great job! Update soon! I loved it! It was great. I really loved the future thing with the little boy and the teenage girl.

Great job! Update soon! I loved it! It was great. I really loved the future thing with the little boy and the teenage girl.
9/30/2008 c1
6Sorkin's Gal Friday
What? No answer? Are they pregnant? I have to know!
I really liked this line: "I wince internally as the anxiety in his voice hit me like a load of bricks, or a box of paper."

What? No answer? Are they pregnant? I have to know!
I really liked this line: "I wince internally as the anxiety in his voice hit me like a load of bricks, or a box of paper."
9/30/2008 c1 officejam
please continue! this is amazing. and i could seriously feel their love in your writing. =]
please continue! this is amazing. and i could seriously feel their love in your writing. =]
9/29/2008 c1 Inactivekj562
Great chapter just wanted to let you know that this is the offical spelling of Beesly.
Great chapter just wanted to let you know that this is the offical spelling of Beesly.
9/29/2008 c1
19JAMonMyToast
Ah! I loved it, the banter was cute and you made me totally anxious to see what would happen. Dammit, why did you have to do the cliffhanger? Haha I do those too, don't worry. Awesome job, well written.

Ah! I loved it, the banter was cute and you made me totally anxious to see what would happen. Dammit, why did you have to do the cliffhanger? Haha I do those too, don't worry. Awesome job, well written.
9/29/2008 c1 lieea
OMG...reat story please PLEASE continue...PLEASE? i love it!
OMG...reat story please PLEASE continue...PLEASE? i love it!