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9/30/2008 c1 midsummerstars
You totally made my day! What could be better than waking up, checking my email and finding that the first chapter is up! YAY!

Hit or miss? Are you kidding? You could NEVER disappoint! From Bella's piano lessons to the instant mashed potatoes to Emmett's CRAZY antics you had me in stitches! I have missed your characters so much and this chapter was MORE MORE MORE than I could have hoped for!
9/30/2008 c1 mherman7
Omg! Loved it! Hit!

I can't wait to see Rose's reaction to Emmett being in Forks! I love commitment gung-ho Edward. I want to meet a boy like him! =)

Can't wait til next chapter!

9/30/2008 c1 InnerAnomaly
*jumps for joy*

I'm so ecstatic that More More More is finally up! I love it! Though the beginning scared me for a second... lol. I'm wicked excited to see how everything unfolds! :)
9/30/2008 c1 annahtuR
I love it update soon!
9/30/2008 c1 margiewolf
loved the chapter...happy birthday...
9/30/2008 c1 3mbmimi
happy birthday!

totally awesome start. i've missed iewis-land, it always made me feel fluffy. more more more is exactly what i need, i can't wait for more.

(how incredibly cliché. i'm loving this story already though.)

have a nice day and update soon :):)

9/30/2008 c1 momma2three
yeah! i loved it! i'm sure edward's thrilled emmett's around!
9/30/2008 c1 2lil-devilish-kitten
yay your back, i missed it im really excited about M and i loved the first chapter. lol mike and falicia hilarious!

much luv and chocolate chip cookie dough ice cream

9/30/2008 c1 Luvntwilight
M Love it! So excited about another fun filled Maroon hoodie army story.
9/30/2008 c1 vivianx3
i love this storyy :DD
9/30/2008 c1 Hope4more
Welcome back! Woot Woot. Off to a good start. Although I will be honest, it feels different. Rightfully so, I mean the whole instant mashed potatoes was just heart breaking. And the fact that they all tap dance around the past, is a little hard too. I know I loved the comaradre (sp?) they all had and now they are all in different places. Which happens to everyone at some point in their lives. I really do love this and will always be reading. I can't wait for them all to reconnect again. I am still shocked that Bella and Edward are still going strong in the no sex area. I understand the not wanting to until marriage, but at the rate they are going it could be a few years. Yikes.

You did an awesome job on the start of this one. I love how you can twist a story like no other...can't wait to find out where this story will go. BRAVO
9/30/2008 c1 1kiaras-magical-melody
haha emmetts back! lol i loved when edward said "Oh yeah, my brother calling out your name as I kiss you passionately is entirely normal. I love it." :D i'm SO HAPPY this is up!
9/30/2008 c1 YankeesFan12

More More More is an amazing title, by the way. Simply amazing. So, happy almost birthday. Hope your day goes wonderfully :)

On with the review:

I loved the preface. It was perfect. The quote... the structure.. how it was so vague, yet so detailed. I don't know. I liked it a lot. I absolutely LOVE Jasper so its awesome that he's in the story pretty often. Like in IEWIS, I loved the sharpie scene and the cheese thing and the New York New York when he got drunk. Of course, Edward was perfect too, but I think Jazz will always be my favorite. Anyway... I liked how you put the three brothers together again. That was nice. The mash potatoes thing was really funny. Ok, this is coming to be quite the lengthy list, so I'll just go.

You are doing a great job. Kudos to you. Happy Birthday, for tomorrow. And good luck with this story and everything! =)
9/30/2008 c1 20wordsaremyescape
emmett i would run. and run FAST! great first chapter! UPDATE SOON PLZ!
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