for More More More9/23/2012 c21 
1AvidReader416
I'm on my phone & it's hard to review, but that wedding scene was the funniest thing I think I've ever read. I was laughing so hard I was crying! I'll go back & review all the chapters when I'm on a computer. I have laughed at something in every chapter in this story & the last, but that one takes the cake! Love it. :)
1AvidReader416I'm on my phone & it's hard to review, but that wedding scene was the funniest thing I think I've ever read. I was laughing so hard I was crying! I'll go back & review all the chapters when I'm on a computer. I have laughed at something in every chapter in this story & the last, but that one takes the cake! Love it. :)
9/9/2012 c13 Guest
I am very grateful to you my now fiancee proposed when i was reading you first story and it has become more romantic as we have progressed. i feel like you are telling our story way after you wrote this. thank you
I am very grateful to you my now fiancee proposed when i was reading you first story and it has become more romantic as we have progressed. i feel like you are telling our story way after you wrote this. thank you
9/1/2012 c19 Lightninf
Truth be told, I'm not an Edward and Bella fan. Don't get me wrong, I like the pairing, just not the characters. But I love your stories anyway. Particularly this one. Especcially how you portrayed Aro.
Truth be told, I'm not an Edward and Bella fan. Don't get me wrong, I like the pairing, just not the characters. But I love your stories anyway. Particularly this one. Especcially how you portrayed Aro.
8/28/2012 c1 themushymushroom
AMAZING WRITING...MMM and IEWIS!
i just fell for all these characters all over again!
keep writing and making my day!
AMAZING WRITING...MMM and IEWIS!
i just fell for all these characters all over again!
keep writing and making my day!
8/1/2012 c7 Lightninf
I liked reading in Emmett's point of view best, actually. I think got his Emmett-ish personality just right, quite frankly. He acts like that and I can picture him thinking all of those things too. Maybe in future do a chapter from Jasper or Alice's point of view so we can really understand the awkwardness of the whole marriage thing from their perspective. For the record: I have not finished this story yet so don't think I sound weird in case you do post a chapter from their point of view later.
I liked reading in Emmett's point of view best, actually. I think got his Emmett-ish personality just right, quite frankly. He acts like that and I can picture him thinking all of those things too. Maybe in future do a chapter from Jasper or Alice's point of view so we can really understand the awkwardness of the whole marriage thing from their perspective. For the record: I have not finished this story yet so don't think I sound weird in case you do post a chapter from their point of view later.
7/28/2012 c11 Rachel
My goodness girl. You're the only writer ever to make me feel with the characters. Your writing is so deliciously awesome that I was literally freaking out at the end of the last chapter. I was chanting WITH Bella for Jasper to say yes to Alice. Car, you are a truly amazing author and I wish I had half your talent. I kind of wish you'd tone it down with Edward and Bella lovey dovey kissy stuff. I hate having to read through there make out sessions lol... I'm excited to read the rest. Thanks, Rachel.
My goodness girl. You're the only writer ever to make me feel with the characters. Your writing is so deliciously awesome that I was literally freaking out at the end of the last chapter. I was chanting WITH Bella for Jasper to say yes to Alice. Car, you are a truly amazing author and I wish I had half your talent. I kind of wish you'd tone it down with Edward and Bella lovey dovey kissy stuff. I hate having to read through there make out sessions lol... I'm excited to read the rest. Thanks, Rachel.
5/29/2012 c24 Silent Harmony
Bella shouldn't have to apologize for anything period. As Emmett had said, nay for Rosalie for not treating the argument better.
Bella shouldn't have to apologize for anything period. As Emmett had said, nay for Rosalie for not treating the argument better.
5/28/2012 c23 Silent Harmony
Honestly, all friendships end at one point. I'd rather they break up than make up because by the time I read that part, I'll probably cringe at the 'attempt'. Even if apologies are said, this incident will be hard to forget. They need new friends.
Even if you don't agree with me, I said what I said. :( thi made me so sad and angry.
Honestly, all friendships end at one point. I'd rather they break up than make up because by the time I read that part, I'll probably cringe at the 'attempt'. Even if apologies are said, this incident will be hard to forget. They need new friends.
Even if you don't agree with me, I said what I said. :( thi made me so sad and angry.
4/22/2012 c23 vindictivesighs
Honestly, I think Rosalie is correct in saying that Edward is too busy 'following his dream' and that Bella needs to stop being so broken! Bella has become stronger, but I think she should put herself first sometimes. I feel sorry for Alice because all she's trying to do is to patch things up! *sigh*
Honestly, I think Rosalie is correct in saying that Edward is too busy 'following his dream' and that Bella needs to stop being so broken! Bella has become stronger, but I think she should put herself first sometimes. I feel sorry for Alice because all she's trying to do is to patch things up! *sigh*
2/14/2012 c22 magmom2
I don't know who to blame, you or Edward but he said he was touring for the summer. That is 2 1/2 to 3 months tops, not 6 months.
I don't know who to blame, you or Edward but he said he was touring for the summer. That is 2 1/2 to 3 months tops, not 6 months.
1/3/2012 c28 kstar0330
Beautiful Epi, the baby letter was very sweet. I will always think of this story when I see or think of pretzels, lol, "The Pretzel" Oh and Billy Idol that was too cool, more more more! :)
Beautiful Epi, the baby letter was very sweet. I will always think of this story when I see or think of pretzels, lol, "The Pretzel" Oh and Billy Idol that was too cool, more more more! :)
1/3/2012 c27 kstar0330
Great job on the sequel just loved it just as much as the original IEWIS both very sweet even with the tears, lots of fun, plenty of laughter and a trip into the sexiverse all of this was just more more more to Love. Now gonna read the Epi. :)
Great job on the sequel just loved it just as much as the original IEWIS both very sweet even with the tears, lots of fun, plenty of laughter and a trip into the sexiverse all of this was just more more more to Love. Now gonna read the Epi. :)
1/1/2012 c5 kstar0330
All I have to say is like I said about IEWIS that even with the T rating this is still a very good story that doesn't have to get down and dirty to be good and yes I've read Private Tutor which was good too. Don't normally read T's but this is still very good even without the citrus. :o Though E going caveman on B was too funny I must say after what he thought he heard. lol :)
All I have to say is like I said about IEWIS that even with the T rating this is still a very good story that doesn't have to get down and dirty to be good and yes I've read Private Tutor which was good too. Don't normally read T's but this is still very good even without the citrus. :o Though E going caveman on B was too funny I must say after what he thought he heard. lol :)
12/24/2011 c22 vindictivesighs
I completely agree with Rosalie. Bella needs to stop dwelling over the fact that Edward is not with her. Edward does control he a whole lot and doesn't let her do everything she has the potential to do. Rosalie was a bit out of line and could have worded it differently.
I completely agree with Rosalie. Bella needs to stop dwelling over the fact that Edward is not with her. Edward does control he a whole lot and doesn't let her do everything she has the potential to do. Rosalie was a bit out of line and could have worded it differently.