for I Do10/1/2008 c1 
2Livvielove
Kellibear,
Another beautifully written piece of art from you. You know where I stand on the shipper line and being a Jason and Sam fan this was bittersweet. I think you did a remarkable job with the details and with their emotions. I know I'm new to the show but I could see this play out perfectly in my mind and that isn't something many authors can do.
You have a truly amazing talent with writing. You get inside of these characters mindsets and write them in a way as if you are going through the emotions. I could tell how torn Sam truly way. The part that stood out to me was,
"Because it'd be easier if she was still in love with him. It wouldn't hurt so badly to break Lucky's heart. And her own heart wouldn't go through the damage that it was going through. Instead, in the end all three of them would lose. Lucky, because he lost the woman he loved. Sam, because she was fated to be with somebody she didn't love nearly as much as she did another man. And Jason, because no matter how hard he tried, he'd never get her to love him the way he loved her."
That whole paragraph was simply beautiful, bittersweet and poetic. Great job on this..if you decide to evolve this past a one shot you can count on me as a reader.
-Liv
2LivvieloveKellibear,
Another beautifully written piece of art from you. You know where I stand on the shipper line and being a Jason and Sam fan this was bittersweet. I think you did a remarkable job with the details and with their emotions. I know I'm new to the show but I could see this play out perfectly in my mind and that isn't something many authors can do.
You have a truly amazing talent with writing. You get inside of these characters mindsets and write them in a way as if you are going through the emotions. I could tell how torn Sam truly way. The part that stood out to me was,
"Because it'd be easier if she was still in love with him. It wouldn't hurt so badly to break Lucky's heart. And her own heart wouldn't go through the damage that it was going through. Instead, in the end all three of them would lose. Lucky, because he lost the woman he loved. Sam, because she was fated to be with somebody she didn't love nearly as much as she did another man. And Jason, because no matter how hard he tried, he'd never get her to love him the way he loved her."
That whole paragraph was simply beautiful, bittersweet and poetic. Great job on this..if you decide to evolve this past a one shot you can count on me as a reader.
-Liv
9/30/2008 c1 12rhilove2read
This was amazing. I actually had tears in my eyes at the end. So good! Thank you for writing this!
12rhilove2readThis was amazing. I actually had tears in my eyes at the end. So good! Thank you for writing this!
9/30/2008 c1 sweetassassin23
Even though I don't watch GH, I had to read and review this fic. One, because you're awesome. And two, because you are such a talented writer. That being said, I loved this oneshot. The pain that Sam felt, knowing that she's marrying a man that she doesn't love anymore, made me feel so incredibly sad for her. I loved the memory she had of Lucky and I felt so horrible that she had such a great love for him, and yet she was marrying someone that she couldn't have that great love with. Heartbreaking :(
Even though I don't watch GH, I had to read and review this fic. One, because you're awesome. And two, because you are such a talented writer. That being said, I loved this oneshot. The pain that Sam felt, knowing that she's marrying a man that she doesn't love anymore, made me feel so incredibly sad for her. I loved the memory she had of Lucky and I felt so horrible that she had such a great love for him, and yet she was marrying someone that she couldn't have that great love with. Heartbreaking :(
9/30/2008 c1 5gh08shsustyle
that was good. i really liked it. poor sam, poor lucky
and as a spinelli fan, hey spinelli was there!
5gh08shsustylethat was good. i really liked it. poor sam, poor lucky
and as a spinelli fan, hey spinelli was there!
9/30/2008 c1 22Just Yesterday
OMG Kel, I can not believe I fell asleep last night/this morning. One minute I had put my head down on the desk the next I was gone. I woke up at 6:30 with a killer headache and neck cramp lol.
I was happy to see that you posted this this morning. And thank you so much for the shout out. I will be your lab rat anytime you need one, LOL.
I knew this story was going to make me cry the second you told me the topic but I couldn't turn away from it. That is saying something considering I am a Jason fan anda Jasam fan. That said, I still believe that when I watch the clips I will fully support Lucky and Sam. Which is hard for me to say because my love for Jasam is strong as hell.
Anyways back to the story- I've told you how great it was. I loved the irony of the situation, I love how you managed to make me feel sympathetic towards Lucky. He believes Jason took Elizabeth and Jake away from him and now, he's managed to steal Sam away.
I loved the fact that it was Sam's idea. I know that she's over him and isn't in love with him anymore but the simple fact of her asking him despite everything he's put her through and that they've been through... he means a lot to her. She could never let him go to jail, especially not when he was defending her.
You know I loved you for the fact that Jason is still in love with Sam. Because I honestly think that even though he's trying to move on with Liz, it's destined to fail. Because his heart... it belongs to her. I don't think anyone else will compare to her, sure as hell not Liz. The only one that might is Jake and that's why I believe he is where he is presently.
This part broke my heart:
Lucky, because he lost the woman he loved. Sam, because she was fated to be with somebody she didn't love nearly as much as she did another man. And Jason, because no matter how hard he tried, he'd never get her to love him the way he loved her.
I hate that I am actually hoping the wedding doesn't go through lol. It's hard for me to imagine not wanting a Jasam ending but I can't help but think they all deserve better.
The flashback between Lucky/Sam made me laugh. It seemed like such a playful Sam thing to do. And with the clips that I've been watching, I've missed the playful Sam. Thankfully Lucky brings that out in her which is the only comfort I have with all this Jasam/Lusam reality crap.
Great job with the story. I cried so much but then again, you knew that last night lol. Can't wait to see your other GH stories. Especially the crossover one!
22Just YesterdayOMG Kel, I can not believe I fell asleep last night/this morning. One minute I had put my head down on the desk the next I was gone. I woke up at 6:30 with a killer headache and neck cramp lol.
I was happy to see that you posted this this morning. And thank you so much for the shout out. I will be your lab rat anytime you need one, LOL.
I knew this story was going to make me cry the second you told me the topic but I couldn't turn away from it. That is saying something considering I am a Jason fan anda Jasam fan. That said, I still believe that when I watch the clips I will fully support Lucky and Sam. Which is hard for me to say because my love for Jasam is strong as hell.
Anyways back to the story- I've told you how great it was. I loved the irony of the situation, I love how you managed to make me feel sympathetic towards Lucky. He believes Jason took Elizabeth and Jake away from him and now, he's managed to steal Sam away.
I loved the fact that it was Sam's idea. I know that she's over him and isn't in love with him anymore but the simple fact of her asking him despite everything he's put her through and that they've been through... he means a lot to her. She could never let him go to jail, especially not when he was defending her.
You know I loved you for the fact that Jason is still in love with Sam. Because I honestly think that even though he's trying to move on with Liz, it's destined to fail. Because his heart... it belongs to her. I don't think anyone else will compare to her, sure as hell not Liz. The only one that might is Jake and that's why I believe he is where he is presently.
This part broke my heart:
Lucky, because he lost the woman he loved. Sam, because she was fated to be with somebody she didn't love nearly as much as she did another man. And Jason, because no matter how hard he tried, he'd never get her to love him the way he loved her.
I hate that I am actually hoping the wedding doesn't go through lol. It's hard for me to imagine not wanting a Jasam ending but I can't help but think they all deserve better.
The flashback between Lucky/Sam made me laugh. It seemed like such a playful Sam thing to do. And with the clips that I've been watching, I've missed the playful Sam. Thankfully Lucky brings that out in her which is the only comfort I have with all this Jasam/Lusam reality crap.
Great job with the story. I cried so much but then again, you knew that last night lol. Can't wait to see your other GH stories. Especially the crossover one!
9/30/2008 c1 nope37
ILU Shifty. *cries*
So, two preliminary things. a] I was 15 minutes late for class today and I didn't even read this last night. b] Look! I signed in this time. :P
Ok, way to make me unbearably sad for everyone involved. :'( I can't even handle it. Much as I'm sad for Jason, I'm so glad he still loves her and doesn't want the crazy manipulative bitch. Also, I got a bit of a sick pleasure that the asshole was suffering for her finally. :D What? I'm not cruel. Mostly though, I was just sad for everyone.
Poor Lucky. :( The flashback was too sad and cute and so true to Sam and what their problems are. They've both been hurt so much and convinced that they were to blame. She's so scared of making all the mistakes again because it's so hard to comprehend that what she had with Jason fell so far and they ended up where they did. She never wants that to happen again.
In conclusion, way to make me almost cry in class, and I can't wait to read the others.
ILU Shifty. *cries*
So, two preliminary things. a] I was 15 minutes late for class today and I didn't even read this last night. b] Look! I signed in this time. :P
Ok, way to make me unbearably sad for everyone involved. :'( I can't even handle it. Much as I'm sad for Jason, I'm so glad he still loves her and doesn't want the crazy manipulative bitch. Also, I got a bit of a sick pleasure that the asshole was suffering for her finally. :D What? I'm not cruel. Mostly though, I was just sad for everyone.
Poor Lucky. :( The flashback was too sad and cute and so true to Sam and what their problems are. They've both been hurt so much and convinced that they were to blame. She's so scared of making all the mistakes again because it's so hard to comprehend that what she had with Jason fell so far and they ended up where they did. She never wants that to happen again.
In conclusion, way to make me almost cry in class, and I can't wait to read the others.