
7/7/2018 c1 Guest
Don... Mister high and mighty, when it suits him.
Don... Mister high and mighty, when it suits him.
3/5/2009 c1
64epalladino
Nice series of episode tags. Great scene between Don and Charlie, both awkward and angry, but the affection and need for each other is still evident. Thanks, Beth

Nice series of episode tags. Great scene between Don and Charlie, both awkward and angry, but the affection and need for each other is still evident. Thanks, Beth
10/3/2008 c1 Patty
I passed over your story when I first noticed it but eventually came back to it. I'm tickled
to death now I did because it's just great.
The dialogue fits each brother and you gave both's POV beautifully. I do hope the
new season totally exonerates Charlie and gets Don back in the FBI's good graces.
I particularly liked the paragraph beginning Very Zen. It let me picture so many events
in their lives.
Good job, girl !
I passed over your story when I first noticed it but eventually came back to it. I'm tickled
to death now I did because it's just great.
The dialogue fits each brother and you gave both's POV beautifully. I do hope the
new season totally exonerates Charlie and gets Don back in the FBI's good graces.
I particularly liked the paragraph beginning Very Zen. It let me picture so many events
in their lives.
Good job, girl !
10/3/2008 c1
18Lisa Paris
Loved this - nicely done and not overly partisan. I think you raised some really salient points.

Loved this - nicely done and not overly partisan. I think you raised some really salient points.