
2/7 c34 Obi
I've been reading this since 2012, and ao3 is down, so I'm back for a reread. Thank you for writing one of my all-time favorite fics!
I've been reading this since 2012, and ao3 is down, so I'm back for a reread. Thank you for writing one of my all-time favorite fics!
2/6 c34 Ember
Why are they always betting their hand, is that a Canadian thing? Mei-chan why are you so much fun, you do know all the other occupants of the room are male right? XD I really hope you come back to this Author-chan, this is easily the best if not one of the best Naruto fanfics I've ever read, I really don't want to see it die.
Why are they always betting their hand, is that a Canadian thing? Mei-chan why are you so much fun, you do know all the other occupants of the room are male right? XD I really hope you come back to this Author-chan, this is easily the best if not one of the best Naruto fanfics I've ever read, I really don't want to see it die.
2/4 c26 Ember
Ah, another Star Wars fan reading a Naruto fic. This is why I despise Orochimaru, he and this scientist deserve to be fried to a crisp for such despicable horrid actions.
Ah, another Star Wars fan reading a Naruto fic. This is why I despise Orochimaru, he and this scientist deserve to be fried to a crisp for such despicable horrid actions.
2/4 c22 Ember
Guys, just accept, I think you can afford to do that, and you will have more money, and you'll also help a lot of people.
Guys, just accept, I think you can afford to do that, and you will have more money, and you'll also help a lot of people.
2/3 c20 Ember
So you're Canadian? No wonder I like your story! One of my favorite bands is Canadian.
So you're Canadian? No wonder I like your story! One of my favorite bands is Canadian.
2/2 c14 Ember
Okay, I didn't think of that, it seemed too simple at the time, well done Author-chan!
Okay, I didn't think of that, it seemed too simple at the time, well done Author-chan!
2/2 c13 Ember
What does a black cat have to do with things? All the "family's" names are shadow themed, and black would go with that I suppose.
What does a black cat have to do with things? All the "family's" names are shadow themed, and black would go with that I suppose.
2/2 c12 Ember
This story is amazing, no way would I give up on it!
This story is amazing, no way would I give up on it!
2/2 c7 Ember
Naruto, is it really a good idea to name one of your clones "joker"? that just seems like it would be suspicious.
Naruto, is it really a good idea to name one of your clones "joker"? that just seems like it would be suspicious.
2/1 c3 Ember
I have a feeling Naruto found his father's house...which may or may not be good... That is a good point about his transformation, I never thought of that, but it does make sense. Iruka, I don't think you need to worry about not telling the Hokage, but I do wonder what he's going to think...
I have a feeling Naruto found his father's house...which may or may not be good... That is a good point about his transformation, I never thought of that, but it does make sense. Iruka, I don't think you need to worry about not telling the Hokage, but I do wonder what he's going to think...
2/1 c2 Ember
I know I've read that intro somewhere, but I don't remember which story it was... Aaand all the clones freeze and sloowly turn to look at the door...
I know I've read that intro somewhere, but I don't remember which story it was... Aaand all the clones freeze and sloowly turn to look at the door...
2/1 c1 Ember
Uh-huh Naruto, if you say so. What is the Hokage going to do about him having a copy of the Scroll of Sealing? Surely he won't juts let him keep it.
Uh-huh Naruto, if you say so. What is the Hokage going to do about him having a copy of the Scroll of Sealing? Surely he won't juts let him keep it.
1/29 c34
2OmegaChrome
Such a beautiful cliffhanger. I hope all is well with you, that things are better than when you last published a chapter for this.

Such a beautiful cliffhanger. I hope all is well with you, that things are better than when you last published a chapter for this.
1/13 c34 Guest
Great job on the fic hope to see an update soon
Great job on the fic hope to see an update soon
1/7 c34
36CharmedArtist
This is such an absolutely fantastic story that I read it all in one go, and am immediately adding it to my list of all-time favorite stories. I‘m honestly tempted to start rereading it immediately, and am more pleased than I can say that your last author‘s note stated that you‘re not abandoning the story. There are just too many amazing characters I‘ve grown fond of! (Of course, I‘m dying to find out Ebisu‘s reaction in the next chapter.) Love the incredible depth in both character creation and plot. Good luck with real life and keep up the great work!

This is such an absolutely fantastic story that I read it all in one go, and am immediately adding it to my list of all-time favorite stories. I‘m honestly tempted to start rereading it immediately, and am more pleased than I can say that your last author‘s note stated that you‘re not abandoning the story. There are just too many amazing characters I‘ve grown fond of! (Of course, I‘m dying to find out Ebisu‘s reaction in the next chapter.) Love the incredible depth in both character creation and plot. Good luck with real life and keep up the great work!