for Mirror, Mirror10/25/2009 c30 
7L.A.H.H
Aah! You're not going to tell us whether she saw herself as Muggle or magical, are you? I loved the chapter though, thank you for writing. x
7L.A.H.HAah! You're not going to tell us whether she saw herself as Muggle or magical, are you? I loved the chapter though, thank you for writing. x
10/25/2009 c30 32htbookreader1
hey! so first off..love the disclaimer i like that you said you own what that person wants...happiness...i guess you could look in the mirror and see nothing...cauze of the happiness...really sweet...now to the reivew...so i really liked it and i've always liked mrs figg because she doesnt get a good rap in the books as she should...not that they treat her badly but she doesnt get to be part of the wizarding world even though filtch does...and if filtch can do it...every squib should be able to...thats probably what fitlch woudl see if he looked in the mirror...though maybe he'd just see his cat...actually i was just thinking about squibs the other day and i felt so bad for them...being born without powers to parents with powers...sniff so sad
anway great chap...as always
lots of love
htbookreader1
32htbookreader1hey! so first off..love the disclaimer i like that you said you own what that person wants...happiness...i guess you could look in the mirror and see nothing...cauze of the happiness...really sweet...now to the reivew...so i really liked it and i've always liked mrs figg because she doesnt get a good rap in the books as she should...not that they treat her badly but she doesnt get to be part of the wizarding world even though filtch does...and if filtch can do it...every squib should be able to...thats probably what fitlch woudl see if he looked in the mirror...though maybe he'd just see his cat...actually i was just thinking about squibs the other day and i felt so bad for them...being born without powers to parents with powers...sniff so sad
anway great chap...as always
lots of love
htbookreader1
10/25/2009 c30 629yellow 14
She is in something of a difficult position isn't she? It reminds me of what JK said about Filch, but unlike Filch, Arabella deals with her feelings in a far better manner. Very thoughtful, keep updating
629yellow 14She is in something of a difficult position isn't she? It reminds me of what JK said about Filch, but unlike Filch, Arabella deals with her feelings in a far better manner. Very thoughtful, keep updating
10/24/2009 c30 4InThisMasqueradeOfStars
Hi!
This is a fabulous story! I also love Deathly Musings, by the way. OH! I just finished Thirteen Reasons Why too, and it IS very thought provoking. Its a really good book :] I also love your disclaimers lol. I can never think of good disclaimers. :]
4InThisMasqueradeOfStarsHi!
This is a fabulous story! I also love Deathly Musings, by the way. OH! I just finished Thirteen Reasons Why too, and it IS very thought provoking. Its a really good book :] I also love your disclaimers lol. I can never think of good disclaimers. :]
9/27/2009 c29 32htbookreader1
hey! love it...creative plus love the mastercard disclaimer...it was totally priceless
htbookreader1
32htbookreader1hey! love it...creative plus love the mastercard disclaimer...it was totally priceless
htbookreader1
9/26/2009 c29 629yellow 14
I suspect the start of a transformation that wilead to her marriage with Draco and in turn, the birth of Scorpius. Keep updating
629yellow 14I suspect the start of a transformation that wilead to her marriage with Draco and in turn, the birth of Scorpius. Keep updating
9/26/2009 c29 5Iccle Amy
aww thats sweet.
I like this chap lots, and nice choice of Shakespeare quote btw. :)
x
5Iccle Amyaww thats sweet.
I like this chap lots, and nice choice of Shakespeare quote btw. :)
x
9/25/2009 c29 25The Lime-Wielding Ninja
Wow. You picture Astoria totally different than I do. I picture her with really dark brown hair.
Excellent alliteration. Although 'plausible' is spelled incorrectly. I'm sorry I'm over-correcting again and I didn't mean to!
Update soon! (This was one of the better chapters, I think.)
25The Lime-Wielding NinjaWow. You picture Astoria totally different than I do. I picture her with really dark brown hair.
Excellent alliteration. Although 'plausible' is spelled incorrectly. I'm sorry I'm over-correcting again and I didn't mean to!
Update soon! (This was one of the better chapters, I think.)
9/24/2009 c29 7L.A.H.H
Not what I expected Astoria to be, but all the better because of that. Thank you for updating. x
7L.A.H.HNot what I expected Astoria to be, but all the better because of that. Thank you for updating. x
9/7/2009 c28 L.A.H.H
Thank you for updating! That's a good way to get ideas, the character list! I hope it gives you many more x
Thank you for updating! That's a good way to get ideas, the character list! I hope it gives you many more x
9/7/2009 c28 5Iccle Amy
just what I need afta a long day at work..
another "Mirror, Mirror" update :)
good work, and interesting character choice.
Cant wait 2 see who you pick next
x
5Iccle Amyjust what I need afta a long day at work..
another "Mirror, Mirror" update :)
good work, and interesting character choice.
Cant wait 2 see who you pick next
x
9/7/2009 c28 25The Lime-Wielding Ninja
A happy and fulfilling chapter. I like the resolved feeling. :D
25The Lime-Wielding NinjaA happy and fulfilling chapter. I like the resolved feeling. :D
9/7/2009 c28 629yellow 14
I'd like to feel that Olive did feel guilt about Myrtle, after all people do grow up and you can argue that she is partially responsible for Myrtle being in those toilets at the time of the attack. Very good, keep updating.
629yellow 14I'd like to feel that Olive did feel guilt about Myrtle, after all people do grow up and you can argue that she is partially responsible for Myrtle being in those toilets at the time of the attack. Very good, keep updating.
9/5/2009 c27 14Splash123
Oh my.
I NEVER imagined Demelza this way. So it really surprised me when I loved this. Have you ever noticed how a writer can capture a character or situation so completely that it becomes canon to you? Now whenever I read about Demelza, I'm going to picture her exactly as you wrote her here.
Excellent job!
14Splash123Oh my.
I NEVER imagined Demelza this way. So it really surprised me when I loved this. Have you ever noticed how a writer can capture a character or situation so completely that it becomes canon to you? Now whenever I read about Demelza, I'm going to picture her exactly as you wrote her here.
Excellent job!
8/30/2009 c27 25The Lime-Wielding Ninja
This was a creepy, very well writen chapter, and I liked it a whole lot. That one line, "Demelza Robbins was evil, as evil as they come," gave me goosebumps.
25The Lime-Wielding NinjaThis was a creepy, very well writen chapter, and I liked it a whole lot. That one line, "Demelza Robbins was evil, as evil as they come," gave me goosebumps.