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3/17/2009 c1 spazmonkeykate
aw too cute! great idea! and i loved that episode of the office haha
2/15/2009 c1 4LeahElizabeth
Aw. Adorable! I really liked this.
1/3/2009 c1 Username Unknown
Oh, I liked this too! Sorry for the overdose on exclamation points, and for the lack of some kind of insightful and intelligent sounding feedback... but sometimes I just want to read something that makes me squee for joy and blissfully happy to be shipping this couple and you've totally done that for me. This was just simply adorable... yet still very in character and belivable. LOVED IT!
12/11/2008 c1 21BetweenTwoWorlds
Awesome! That was so freakin' cute! I've been having a bad day..week..etc. and this made me feel so much better! Great job!
11/25/2008 c1 97bingblot
Oh this was adorable! And just awesome. I love poor Booth and how badly his day is going and then how Bones can make it better.
10/14/2008 c1 6Hazmatt
Wonderful story! I really enjoyed it! Perfect!
10/9/2008 c1 5kballgetlost
Aww I love that ep of the office...the look on Jims face when after his craptastic day he realizes Pam fell asleep on his shoulder? Too adorable for words!

And very cute putting Booth and Brennan in this situation. Booth would be so ecstatic if she ever fell asleep on him, lol
10/8/2008 c1 10Sarah9488
oh, we don't get their dinner? ='(

however, cute story... and I haven't read a storylike this so far (apart from the mandatory partner-thing)
10/8/2008 c1 NooooBD
E! Way to get a girl squeeing over different fandoms at very early hours of the day when she should be sleeping. Hell, I had to read this before I went to bed. And it was worth it.

I keep saying that Booth and Brennan should watch The office, they'd learn a lot about office romance. XD

Great job.
10/7/2008 c1 24HawkAngel XD
aw that was so cool! really sweet!

HawkAngel
10/7/2008 c1 mumrulz
**Yeah, I know this has been done a few times, but I thought I'd try my hand at it. **

...& I am glad that you did. It may have been done before...but each author puts their own personal touch to a fic, & you always write such sweet & fluffy ones. It may not have been fluffy in the true 'romantic' sense of the word...but there were so many subtle fluffy moments:

# Booth's thoughts straying to Brennan, while he is supposed to be completely immersed in his paperwork.

# All he wanted to do was to see Brennan, to make sure that everything was OK between them.

# The fact that Brennan had fallen asleep on Booth's shoulder was the highlight of his day.

# The kiss to the top of Brennan's head.

# They were going to have dinner together yeat AGAIN.

Yep, see, sweet & fluffy...can always rely on you

...like Brennan does for Booth, you brighten our day with these fics. :-)

As always, waiting for whatever you have next for us. :-):-):-)
10/7/2008 c1 16NicoleKennedy92
oh how cute!

JJ:P

P.S. IS there more?
10/6/2008 c1 csimesser1
aww thats sweet
10/6/2008 c1 2Dardanelle
So what if this has been written before, every story is unique - that's the advice I got once when I hesitated about writing & posting a fic. Good advice that I followed. I'm glad you wrote and posted this!

You've captured them in the first paragraph and you manage to convey what one of those days when everything goes wrong feels like very convincingly.

Thank you for sharing :)
10/6/2008 c1 43Monisse
Oh you wrote again, that's nice!

I laughed a bit at this story, first poor Booth was having a hell of a day (and I think I developed an odd addiction to torturated Booth... eheh), and then because Brennan actually fell asleep in a lecture! It made me remember the crime scene lecture I had last year... in the front row the teachers were almost sleeping and I actually slept a little during it feeling bored over something I already knew. Too bad that there was no Booth by my side :P

Anyhow, I loved how this turned out, how you made Brennan brighten Booth's day without even try. And even that this isn't a romantic story, it's very sweet and full of warm emotions between the two.

I only hope you write more often!
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