for Your Eyes12/10/2004 c1 
3onisaur
i started reading and kept holding up the sides of a frame to see the picture in. the simple design of couplets made it read as such a deceptively small glimpse of one moment of another. then i realized i was constantly stepping back and spreading the frame and seeing more and more of her. it sneaks up so subtely, and the picture you paint is so comprehensively vast. i love it. you truly capture so many facets of a very complex character. it is beautiful.
3onisauri started reading and kept holding up the sides of a frame to see the picture in. the simple design of couplets made it read as such a deceptively small glimpse of one moment of another. then i realized i was constantly stepping back and spreading the frame and seeing more and more of her. it sneaks up so subtely, and the picture you paint is so comprehensively vast. i love it. you truly capture so many facets of a very complex character. it is beautiful.
2/10/2002 c1 Xerani
Hee hee I said I would review to anyone who reviewed to me ^_^;; Great poem! I really loved it :) hee hee *is off to read the other stories*
Hee hee I said I would review to anyone who reviewed to me ^_^;; Great poem! I really loved it :) hee hee *is off to read the other stories*
12/7/2001 c1 10Ashy
Honestly I've got tears in my eyes and my class mates in the computer room are wondering whats the matter with me *lip quivers* oooh what a touching poem, man no-one's poems have moved me like yours! Like the person said in the other review, you must be so proud of this. So well in character, and so beautiful!
10AshyHonestly I've got tears in my eyes and my class mates in the computer room are wondering whats the matter with me *lip quivers* oooh what a touching poem, man no-one's poems have moved me like yours! Like the person said in the other review, you must be so proud of this. So well in character, and so beautiful!
12/6/2001 c1 2NeptuneBabe
Wow! This was an awesome poem! I liked how you interpreted Lady Unes POV. I can't believe I'm the only one who has read or reviewed this. I think you're a great poet. Thinking up discriptive words that rhyme with each other is hard. I know, because I've written poems (they're just not up on this site). You should be proud that you've written such a great poem. Keep up the good work.
2NeptuneBabeWow! This was an awesome poem! I liked how you interpreted Lady Unes POV. I can't believe I'm the only one who has read or reviewed this. I think you're a great poet. Thinking up discriptive words that rhyme with each other is hard. I know, because I've written poems (they're just not up on this site). You should be proud that you've written such a great poem. Keep up the good work.