for Light within the darkness2/15/2014 c3 
4greenwings33
Well, I am pleased to hear your writing style has improved... Grammar and tenses are very important.
4greenwings33Well, I am pleased to hear your writing style has improved... Grammar and tenses are very important.
1/10/2013 c3 2Bippy Imp
You might not even be on here anymore or you might be dead. I thought that I'd make suggestions anyways. Have him go to the bank ang get some money. Maybe have Harry run into Draco in knocturn alley. That might be how Draco becomes interested in Harry. Maybe Harry's defending a beggar child or something. Mind you, this is just a suggestion. What can I say? I live to serve. BTW I like what you have written so far.
2Bippy ImpYou might not even be on here anymore or you might be dead. I thought that I'd make suggestions anyways. Have him go to the bank ang get some money. Maybe have Harry run into Draco in knocturn alley. That might be how Draco becomes interested in Harry. Maybe Harry's defending a beggar child or something. Mind you, this is just a suggestion. What can I say? I live to serve. BTW I like what you have written so far.
11/11/2012 c3 2light ladybug
if you stay with this story plot line then you could have harry change into some that catches peoples attention, have draco be a veela and professor snape could be harrys dad. that's all i can think of right now um anyway good luck the rest is up to you. by the by is voldie alive or dose he not exist?
2light ladybugif you stay with this story plot line then you could have harry change into some that catches peoples attention, have draco be a veela and professor snape could be harrys dad. that's all i can think of right now um anyway good luck the rest is up to you. by the by is voldie alive or dose he not exist?
10/15/2012 c3 6ME-MK4ever
maybe with him running away you could either go with him ending up with the Malfoy's or Severus Snape, or someone like Remus Lupin. kind of keep him in the circle of people who are popular in the series.
on another note, I really like it so far and can't wait for the rest of the story!
6ME-MK4evermaybe with him running away you could either go with him ending up with the Malfoy's or Severus Snape, or someone like Remus Lupin. kind of keep him in the circle of people who are popular in the series.
on another note, I really like it so far and can't wait for the rest of the story!
7/15/2012 c3 anonymous
Sad you abandoned this. I was hooked.
Sad you abandoned this. I was hooked.
1/29/2012 c3 Eris Potter-Charmed Child
more please and go with what you want and see where it takes you!
more please and go with what you want and see where it takes you!
10/7/2011 c3 haleypotter417
please update
please update
12/22/2010 c3 TwistedLullabies
i think he and draco should end up happily - after a while. but dont let harry be ignored all his life. :(
i think he and draco should end up happily - after a while. but dont let harry be ignored all his life. :(
12/22/2010 c2 TwistedLullabies
yes it does, and yours is. sorry, i'm more in "read" more than "review" mode, so this isnt a very useful review.
yes it does, and yours is. sorry, i'm more in "read" more than "review" mode, so this isnt a very useful review.
12/14/2010 c2 12Ichigo Mirai
this is really good so far! wonder what'll happen next... please update soon...
12Ichigo Miraithis is really good so far! wonder what'll happen next... please update soon...