for Legend Of Naruto6/29 c1 ConfusedSage
Never understood this. What kind of military village has a civilian council, that actually had power? It is a Shinobi village, not a civilian village.
Never understood this. What kind of military village has a civilian council, that actually had power? It is a Shinobi village, not a civilian village.
4/19/2022 c1 Crinightnight
It's really good, i loved it! The only thing i would change probably is the exile's lenght. I would likes to see more of the Black Fox periodo. However It Is really good!
It's really good, i loved it! The only thing i would change probably is the exile's lenght. I would likes to see more of the Black Fox periodo. However It Is really good!
11/7/2020 c5 Santeegan
I don't even know what to say about the story to this point. Everything is horrendously OOC, none of the "antagonists" introduced have motivations that make sense, you're just dropping OC after OC with no internal consistency or reason for existing and backstory dumping like you're showing off a new toy.
I guess that if you're just writing to enjoy writing, then great I guess? I just really wanted to enjoy this because the title and description are evocative but its just so bad so far
I don't even know what to say about the story to this point. Everything is horrendously OOC, none of the "antagonists" introduced have motivations that make sense, you're just dropping OC after OC with no internal consistency or reason for existing and backstory dumping like you're showing off a new toy.
I guess that if you're just writing to enjoy writing, then great I guess? I just really wanted to enjoy this because the title and description are evocative but its just so bad so far
10/25/2020 c26 
4camilaflordeloto
Nooo, I needed more of this fic! Jfc I'm crying but smiling at the same time! My heart cannot handle so many emotions in one chapter. Thanks for the fic!
4camilaflordelotoNooo, I needed more of this fic! Jfc I'm crying but smiling at the same time! My heart cannot handle so many emotions in one chapter. Thanks for the fic!
3/30/2019 c25 Alex Mellinger
She didn't mention Daini in the list of people who she was worried about being killed.
She didn't mention Daini in the list of people who she was worried about being killed.
3/29/2019 c8 Alex Mellinger
I honestly couldn't help but think of Zen Aku from power Rangers wild force with how Naruto made his entrance. Awesome. Top 10 entrances.
I honestly couldn't help but think of Zen Aku from power Rangers wild force with how Naruto made his entrance. Awesome. Top 10 entrances.
12/11/2018 c26 Naruto Fan Dude
Nice story man. Hey, I read from your profile that you take reading requests. I’ve read this awesome story “Switched at Tragedy” by Caliban Super Saiyan 0 that is currently undergoing a rewrite. I highly recommend it with how many Naruto stories you read.
Nice story man. Hey, I read from your profile that you take reading requests. I’ve read this awesome story “Switched at Tragedy” by Caliban Super Saiyan 0 that is currently undergoing a rewrite. I highly recommend it with how many Naruto stories you read.
9/21/2018 c26 8Multiple-Characters1-Acct
Awesome final fight! Awesome story too. And where is The Legend of the Outcast story? I can't find it.
8Multiple-Characters1-AcctAwesome final fight! Awesome story too. And where is The Legend of the Outcast story? I can't find it.
8/4/2018 c25 Nightshadegirl
i highly doubt ganon is gone, just the tsuchikage's body, bet he'll take his true form soon.
i highly doubt ganon is gone, just the tsuchikage's body, bet he'll take his true form soon.
8/4/2018 c24 Nightshadegirl
interesting that those four iwa nins shift. i think i would be screaming till i could no longer scream if i saw all of those skeletons.
interesting that those four iwa nins shift. i think i would be screaming till i could no longer scream if i saw all of those skeletons.
8/4/2018 c23 Nightshadegirl
didn't think ganon would be into that book? now i got the shivers just thinking about it.
didn't think ganon would be into that book? now i got the shivers just thinking about it.