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4/26/2009 c1 51Kidan Yoshilda
Two words.

Too Short.

Also there wasn't enough details in the story chapter to make me want to come back. I hate to say it, but you want to rewrite this one some.

Just my oppention.

Kidan Signing out.
10/25/2008 c1 Gian
Read something similar before, i recomend that you look for "A picture of Beauty" by Himura Alucard, so it don end like a copy.

so keep it up i hope is diferent and interesting.
10/12/2008 c1 0K0
sweet idea but too short. hopein for more^^
10/12/2008 c1 James Birdsong
Good.

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