
8/8/2015 c21
2Firefly Tali
GNJVEKRLJDGKLMVAE
I just read this all in one sitting.
Please update!
I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!
Poor Sitsumi.
Poor Hiei!

GNJVEKRLJDGKLMVAE
I just read this all in one sitting.
Please update!
I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!
Poor Sitsumi.
Poor Hiei!
10/29/2013 c21 Aki.Yume
Please post a new chapter soon XD
The chapter is short but good. Leaves me wantinf for more :)
But PLEASE make it a happy ending. The sufferring of sitsumi and Hiei are too much T.T
Please post a new chapter soon XD
The chapter is short but good. Leaves me wantinf for more :)
But PLEASE make it a happy ending. The sufferring of sitsumi and Hiei are too much T.T
10/29/2013 c21
9Time on my hands
Probably the only thing Hiei hates worse than having feelings is talking about his feelings. It's a really good thing that he has a job to do, or Kurama and Yuuske would be in serious pain. I love this story. Each chapter gets better. Can't wait for the inevitable showdown. Will the talk come before or after the fight? Can't decide which I would prefer. Her talking while dodging Hiei's attempts to kill her, or Hiei talking after she hands him his butt? Maybe a little of both? So many possibilities. The only thing I am sure of is that you will deliver the most entertaining scenario. Next chapter soon please.

Probably the only thing Hiei hates worse than having feelings is talking about his feelings. It's a really good thing that he has a job to do, or Kurama and Yuuske would be in serious pain. I love this story. Each chapter gets better. Can't wait for the inevitable showdown. Will the talk come before or after the fight? Can't decide which I would prefer. Her talking while dodging Hiei's attempts to kill her, or Hiei talking after she hands him his butt? Maybe a little of both? So many possibilities. The only thing I am sure of is that you will deliver the most entertaining scenario. Next chapter soon please.
10/28/2013 c20
1Mariana Lestrange
I LOVE IT ALL!
I wanna see Hiei with her!
Thanks for writing, great characters and pilot.

I LOVE IT ALL!
I wanna see Hiei with her!
Thanks for writing, great characters and pilot.
9/25/2013 c20 Aki.Yume
PLEASE! GIVE IT A HAPPY ENDING!
Don't let Hiei or Sitsumi have a sad ending T.T I'm crying already T.T
Please continue :D The story rocks
PLEASE! GIVE IT A HAPPY ENDING!
Don't let Hiei or Sitsumi have a sad ending T.T I'm crying already T.T
Please continue :D The story rocks
8/25/2013 c20
1MrsMarzia
Amazing story! Please update soon! Can't wait to see where this goes and ends!

Amazing story! Please update soon! Can't wait to see where this goes and ends!
8/23/2013 c20 Me
Breath of Fire..OMG I CAN'T WAIT. This is getting so so good.
Breath of Fire..OMG I CAN'T WAIT. This is getting so so good.
8/18/2013 c3
2KimiGoesCrazy
It's only the 3rd chapter and i'm already addicted 3 i don't know where to start on the compliments. The plot, storyline, emotion, the writting skill... All amazing. You even managed to keep Hiei's character in tact. Very impressive. You are an amazing writter and I can't wait to finish!

It's only the 3rd chapter and i'm already addicted 3 i don't know where to start on the compliments. The plot, storyline, emotion, the writting skill... All amazing. You even managed to keep Hiei's character in tact. Very impressive. You are an amazing writter and I can't wait to finish!
8/12/2013 c17
5instarlightinanotherworld
So, this literally made me cry at some points and other points made me scream.
Please tell me this has a happy ending for Hiei. T_T His heart just got ripped out and twisted in the worst way possible. You are a genius author.

So, this literally made me cry at some points and other points made me scream.
Please tell me this has a happy ending for Hiei. T_T His heart just got ripped out and twisted in the worst way possible. You are a genius author.
8/5/2013 c17 TheBlkKat
So glad you are back in the runnin' cuz seriously with all the plot twists I need this to finish so I can really get the ball rolling with Red Moon Shadow.
So glad you are back in the runnin' cuz seriously with all the plot twists I need this to finish so I can really get the ball rolling with Red Moon Shadow.
8/2/2013 c1 Gone.Moved
I am absolutely in love with the final sentence of this chapter... The thought frame and transition was so seamless.
I am absolutely in love with the final sentence of this chapter... The thought frame and transition was so seamless.