for Locked Inside Her Head10/26/2008 c1 Violet Fumes
Your story flows so easily from one scene to another that I lost myself as I read on. I absolutely loved it!
It didn't reveal too much but said it still, and I loved how you captured the characters' so vividly. I experienced each occurence and harbored each emotion. Kudos on a beautiful fanfiction, it was one of the better ones I've read :]
And kudos also for writing it so well :]]
Your story flows so easily from one scene to another that I lost myself as I read on. I absolutely loved it!
It didn't reveal too much but said it still, and I loved how you captured the characters' so vividly. I experienced each occurence and harbored each emotion. Kudos on a beautiful fanfiction, it was one of the better ones I've read :]
And kudos also for writing it so well :]]
10/21/2008 c1 catalytic angel
please please continue
I love your writing style and I was so freaking disappointed when I got to the end and realised there's no more.
I really hope that you keep going with this and don't give up on it
please please continue
I love your writing style and I was so freaking disappointed when I got to the end and realised there's no more.
I really hope that you keep going with this and don't give up on it