
5/1/2015 c2
1EvilCuttlefish
I really hope that you continuing with this story! It's very good so far.

I really hope that you continuing with this story! It's very good so far.
2/19/2013 c2 Angelica
Please continue this story!
Please continue this story!
5/13/2010 c2
4Upon a Pale Horse
hey man, why havnt you updated in like a year. anyway, this has the making of a good story. anyway, please consider updating

hey man, why havnt you updated in like a year. anyway, this has the making of a good story. anyway, please consider updating
1/5/2010 c2
6Lucem Yoru
lol, I should have guessed Hinata would react like that. This is an interesting story-line, this is the first time I have seen it.

lol, I should have guessed Hinata would react like that. This is an interesting story-line, this is the first time I have seen it.
10/22/2009 c2 Xcorpyo001
:) great story...when we will get a chapter 3?
PS: 'ANBU’s departure also snapped Iruka from his terror induced paralysis and prompted him to do what all men did since the beginning of time when faced by an opponent they just couldn’t hope to defeat, be it an erupting volcano, raging forest fire, or his pregnant wife’s violent mood swings. He dove for cover.'
this was funny as Hell
:) great story...when we will get a chapter 3?
PS: 'ANBU’s departure also snapped Iruka from his terror induced paralysis and prompted him to do what all men did since the beginning of time when faced by an opponent they just couldn’t hope to defeat, be it an erupting volcano, raging forest fire, or his pregnant wife’s violent mood swings. He dove for cover.'
this was funny as Hell
8/27/2009 c2
1naruto kyuubi kage
hey you alerted my story so i came to check ya out its really good
Lol *KAWAII* *Hinata glomps naruto. The Anko Glomps naruto with her chest*
funny i like this story

hey you alerted my story so i came to check ya out its really good
Lol *KAWAII* *Hinata glomps naruto. The Anko Glomps naruto with her chest*
funny i like this story
7/9/2009 c2
12Hiei81
Finally! Chapter two! And it's everything I thought it would be. Wondful. I laughed a lot. Keep it up! Love the Hinata reaction too.

Finally! Chapter two! And it's everything I thought it would be. Wondful. I laughed a lot. Keep it up! Love the Hinata reaction too.
7/7/2009 c2 Oddity
is your mansion next to the pit of lime? or pit of sulfur? i heard there WAS a pit of vodka but god moved it to heven.
...how did you make shino faint? the world would sooner collapse into itself than for shino to publicly loose conciess for any length of time...
i also like that withen 80 paragraphs of your chapter you have naruto being boobed to death. always a good sine!
also make sure you don't lock yourself in your own wine celler. you well drink all yer drink and ya won't haf e drink wen ya wake ups. den wAle you do?
the Oddity
is your mansion next to the pit of lime? or pit of sulfur? i heard there WAS a pit of vodka but god moved it to heven.
...how did you make shino faint? the world would sooner collapse into itself than for shino to publicly loose conciess for any length of time...
i also like that withen 80 paragraphs of your chapter you have naruto being boobed to death. always a good sine!
also make sure you don't lock yourself in your own wine celler. you well drink all yer drink and ya won't haf e drink wen ya wake ups. den wAle you do?
the Oddity
7/7/2009 c2 mysticsea88
Love your story. I just wondering if there really is some kind of connection between the 4th and naruto in you story. I also wonder if kyubi will ever come to the village. Oh and update soon.
Love your story. I just wondering if there really is some kind of connection between the 4th and naruto in you story. I also wonder if kyubi will ever come to the village. Oh and update soon.
7/7/2009 c2
2Zephyr of the Shadows
lol, this story shows some good promise, hope to see another chapter soon

lol, this story shows some good promise, hope to see another chapter soon