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5/1/2015 c2 1EvilCuttlefish
I really hope that you continuing with this story! It's very good so far.
2/19/2013 c2 Angelica
Please continue this story!
2/18/2013 c2 ten195
kml kml kml! update continue and whats the pairings! please put more comedy!
5/13/2010 c2 4Upon a Pale Horse
hey man, why havnt you updated in like a year. anyway, this has the making of a good story. anyway, please consider updating
1/5/2010 c2 6Lucem Yoru
lol, I should have guessed Hinata would react like that. This is an interesting story-line, this is the first time I have seen it.
10/22/2009 c2 Xcorpyo001
:) great story...when we will get a chapter 3?

PS: 'ANBU’s departure also snapped Iruka from his terror induced paralysis and prompted him to do what all men did since the beginning of time when faced by an opponent they just couldn’t hope to defeat, be it an erupting volcano, raging forest fire, or his pregnant wife’s violent mood swings. He dove for cover.'

this was funny as Hell
10/9/2009 c1 1geetac
I enjoyed reading the story's beginning chapter and would like more of the it.
8/27/2009 c2 1naruto kyuubi kage
hey you alerted my story so i came to check ya out its really good

Lol *KAWAII* *Hinata glomps naruto. The Anko Glomps naruto with her chest*

funny i like this story
8/27/2009 c2 3OokamiMoon
hey booze hound u going update this its good stuff
8/20/2009 c1 8bloodlust002
I like funny and and as a good start. Update soon.
7/17/2009 c2 1geetac
I liked reading the chapters and want more of it.
7/9/2009 c2 12Hiei81
Finally! Chapter two! And it's everything I thought it would be. Wondful. I laughed a lot. Keep it up! Love the Hinata reaction too.
7/7/2009 c2 Oddity
is your mansion next to the pit of lime? or pit of sulfur? i heard there WAS a pit of vodka but god moved it to heven.

...how did you make shino faint? the world would sooner collapse into itself than for shino to publicly loose conciess for any length of time...

i also like that withen 80 paragraphs of your chapter you have naruto being boobed to death. always a good sine!

also make sure you don't lock yourself in your own wine celler. you well drink all yer drink and ya won't haf e drink wen ya wake ups. den wAle you do?

the Oddity
7/7/2009 c2 mysticsea88
Love your story. I just wondering if there really is some kind of connection between the 4th and naruto in you story. I also wonder if kyubi will ever come to the village. Oh and update soon.
7/7/2009 c2 2Zephyr of the Shadows
lol, this story shows some good promise, hope to see another chapter soon
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