for The Observer7/6/2009 c2 
459foxgrl
Heh that's so cute. Naruto a kitsune eh?
So are you going to go into what happened to the 4th & his wife?
459foxgrlHeh that's so cute. Naruto a kitsune eh?
So are you going to go into what happened to the 4th & his wife?
7/6/2009 c2 00Eypha
Lol. At the endof chapter 2, Hinata was so funny and Shina fainted. Hahahaha! XD Update soon!
Lol. At the endof chapter 2, Hinata was so funny and Shina fainted. Hahahaha! XD Update soon!
7/5/2009 c2 5Rose Tiger
Cute! Please keep going and separate the speeches from the narration so it can be easier to read.
5Rose TigerCute! Please keep going and separate the speeches from the narration so it can be easier to read.
7/5/2009 c2 P5yCH0
Wow. You written second chapter. I hope 3rd one will get faster then this one, eh?
Good read, funny stuff.
Wow. You written second chapter. I hope 3rd one will get faster then this one, eh?
Good read, funny stuff.
3/28/2009 c1 3infiniteternity
please do continue soon. This story seems to be quite fun and I just can't wait for the adventure to come!
3infiniteternityplease do continue soon. This story seems to be quite fun and I just can't wait for the adventure to come!
11/1/2008 c1 2SordweilderSurvivor
very good. i see much much promise in this story. i look forward to the next chapter. great wrighting by the way. praticaly perfect.
2SordweilderSurvivorvery good. i see much much promise in this story. i look forward to the next chapter. great wrighting by the way. praticaly perfect.
10/18/2008 c1 Pyroprogramer
seems like an interesting start i do have to mention that a little more background would be nice as you mentioned Minto died that naruto looks like him however it appears the sealing never happened and the kyuubi son.
other then those thoughts it seems like a real intresting story and i cant wait to read more
seems like an interesting start i do have to mention that a little more background would be nice as you mentioned Minto died that naruto looks like him however it appears the sealing never happened and the kyuubi son.
other then those thoughts it seems like a real intresting story and i cant wait to read more