for The Observer10/17/2008 c1 vash3055
great start continue there is more the the deaths of the fourth's family then meets the eye but that will come later
great start continue there is more the the deaths of the fourth's family then meets the eye but that will come later
10/17/2008 c1 
12Hiei81
i like this idea. i've never read something even close to this, so i'am interested in how this will unroll. please write more!
12Hiei81i like this idea. i've never read something even close to this, so i'am interested in how this will unroll. please write more!
10/17/2008 c1 2Hannyu Arashi
interesting start using naruto as an acctual Kitsune. Wiki has a interesting artical on kitsune if you need ideas for abilities. how old is naruto acctually folklore says a kitsune doesn't get its second tail untill after about a thousand years. i can see some fun happening when his kitsune ways start clashing with human ways. anyway keep going with this id like to see how it goes.
-Arashi
2Hannyu Arashiinteresting start using naruto as an acctual Kitsune. Wiki has a interesting artical on kitsune if you need ideas for abilities. how old is naruto acctually folklore says a kitsune doesn't get its second tail untill after about a thousand years. i can see some fun happening when his kitsune ways start clashing with human ways. anyway keep going with this id like to see how it goes.
-Arashi
10/17/2008 c1 8soundless steps
(To start an aliance, an ammbasador of the Kitsune demon clan is sent to Konoha. Now he must adapt to the new environment, and it must adapt to him. Naru/Hina, posible lemon.)
Feel free to use that to improve your own summary. Will Naruto be on Hinata's team, replacing Kiba in the process. I love Hinata/Naruto/Shino teammups.
8soundless steps(To start an aliance, an ammbasador of the Kitsune demon clan is sent to Konoha. Now he must adapt to the new environment, and it must adapt to him. Naru/Hina, posible lemon.)
Feel free to use that to improve your own summary. Will Naruto be on Hinata's team, replacing Kiba in the process. I love Hinata/Naruto/Shino teammups.