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4/3/2011 c3 1csibpip
It's not bad!
2/2/2011 c7 AzazelLuciferDeathCrowley
awesome really good
4/2/2010 c7 510wolves
Update, update, update! I love this! ^^
1/27/2010 c6 Dri Mathews
wow that was so awsome amazinly cool wonderfly wonderfull!
7/13/2009 c6 10wolves
This story is great! Please, for all that is good in the world, update!
3/21/2009 c6 5Double-Portion
Cool story.

Well for names I think it sounds good just a bit... classic perhaps:

Beyond Obscurity,

Opaque Shadows,

Beyond The Murk,

Inscrucible Darkness,

Failure Of Cognizance.

I think those all sound rather impressive
3/9/2009 c6 ABitterPill
An interesting twist on things. I'm curious for the back history behind the "Yami". It seems we see bits and pieces of it, but don't quite have a clear picture yet.

I'd really like to see longer chapters I must say... these ones just seem so short. I'm used to seeing chapters in the 10K+ word range. That's just a personal preference but it seems to me you just can't go into the level of detail I like seeing with these shorter chapters.

Sad that she had to die this chapter, but I suppose everything must have it's starting point.

This could prove to be an entertaining fic as time goes on.
3/8/2009 c6 Lexor
that was great, naruto finding a dream and with hokuto's help killed anti-naruto. update soon, i want to see how naruto and kyuubi interact for now on.
3/6/2009 c1 2Vilkath
hard to comment on the story as a whole, but even for a prolgue I have to say this is way to short to post as a seperate chapter.
3/3/2009 c6 27Shea Rya
another awsome chapter yet again
10/23/2008 c5 3narutoluv
omg I love this story

I love the whole darkness thing but I'm still confused to what it is

anyways please update soon
10/23/2008 c5 27Shea Rya
Write more!I love it!
10/22/2008 c4 The High Demon Lord
You wrote this phrase:

“Yeah, same... Hey! Want to go for a scroll?”

I think you mean:

“Yeah, same... Hey! Want to go for a stroll?”

Other wise good story.
10/18/2008 c1 2BeauEdythe
Who came up with Cliffhangers really. Update soon please
10/18/2008 c1 Lawrence
So cruel stopping there, I want to know what happens next!

I can't help but be reminded of Nero the Sable when the dark substance came from Naruto.

Oh well, that's just me, but I'm hooked. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.

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