for A light in the Dark1/3/2009 c8 
6PhoenixSpirit10500
lol, that was like almost word for word!
when will you next update? do you want me to write some more? even though i have written like another 2 chapters!
6PhoenixSpirit10500lol, that was like almost word for word!
when will you next update? do you want me to write some more? even though i have written like another 2 chapters!
1/1/2009 c6 PhoenixSpirit10500
some of that didnt make sense! if you read it through...you put some of it twice etc.
I'll send you a PM
but it's good. Of course it's good, I wrote basically all of it :P
some of that didnt make sense! if you read it through...you put some of it twice etc.
I'll send you a PM
but it's good. Of course it's good, I wrote basically all of it :P
11/20/2008 c5 PhoenixSpirit10500
AH u updated!
finally!
i can help u if u want ;)
i thought it was Ron, who had the knife attack thing?
lol
good though
cant believe he told her he liked rachael! *gasps*
AH u updated!
finally!
i can help u if u want ;)
i thought it was Ron, who had the knife attack thing?
lol
good though
cant believe he told her he liked rachael! *gasps*
11/4/2008 c4 1Marieheart
Wow...hot...haha
i think claire might kill u in a sec tho
and that "oh i forgot my book...what a shame" thing is part of my tact
and i would have left it there on purpose
lol
is he gunna ask her out?
coz if so i think you should take a leaf out of tylers books and do it the same as he asked rachael out coz that was sweet!
haha
ANYWAY
don't let claire kill you...too much xD
Natalie x
1MarieheartWow...hot...haha
i think claire might kill u in a sec tho
and that "oh i forgot my book...what a shame" thing is part of my tact
and i would have left it there on purpose
lol
is he gunna ask her out?
coz if so i think you should take a leaf out of tylers books and do it the same as he asked rachael out coz that was sweet!
haha
ANYWAY
don't let claire kill you...too much xD
Natalie x
10/27/2008 c1 1Becca - loves - twlight
hmm i wonder what will happen to them
they seem to suit each other lol
i think shygirl might explode in a minute though!
1Becca - loves - twlighthmm i wonder what will happen to them
they seem to suit each other lol
i think shygirl might explode in a minute though!
10/24/2008 c3 6PhoenixSpirit10500
TELL HER WHAT?
TELL ME WAT?
lol
getting too excited over here!
update
soon
PLEASE
6PhoenixSpirit10500TELL HER WHAT?
TELL ME WAT?
lol
getting too excited over here!
update
soon
PLEASE
10/22/2008 c2 1Marieheart
Hey charlotte
it's natalie
you might already know but hey!
i thought i would tell you anyway
this is good its is picking up FINALLY xD
jkn
love yas
me x
1MarieheartHey charlotte
it's natalie
you might already know but hey!
i thought i would tell you anyway
this is good its is picking up FINALLY xD
jkn
love yas
me x
10/21/2008 c2 6PhoenixSpirit10500
OMG
OMG
that is so gd
damn u! u r a better writer than me!
what am i actually better at than u
i need something to cling on to!
6PhoenixSpirit10500OMG
OMG
that is so gd
damn u! u r a better writer than me!
what am i actually better at than u
i need something to cling on to!
10/20/2008 c1 6PhoenixSpirit10500
omg
charlotte!
wat hav u done!
im the main character
AH
i feel so embarassed
U NEED TO TELL ME THE PLOT
AND IM SO BEING UR BETA!
6PhoenixSpirit10500omg
charlotte!
wat hav u done!
im the main character
AH
i feel so embarassed
U NEED TO TELL ME THE PLOT
AND IM SO BEING UR BETA!