for What I Want5/10/2016 c1 Belin
Gooood! I check every day, since you said you will post in may. This is my new obsession. I simply adore it. And make sure its as long as possible. Post sooon!
Bella
Gooood! I check every day, since you said you will post in may. This is my new obsession. I simply adore it. And make sure its as long as possible. Post sooon!
Bella
5/4/2016 c22 Belin
I hope you will post very soon. I am excited to read more. And good luck with whatever affairs you have - Please, please update soooooooon -
Bella
I hope you will post very soon. I am excited to read more. And good luck with whatever affairs you have - Please, please update soooooooon -
Bella
4/17/2016 c22 Alice Beckheart
I was just re-reading the story and found out that you are working on the 23rd chapter. I am really happy to learn that we will soon be able to read more of this incredible story and know more about Haruhi's and Nekozawa's growing relationship. Looking forward for the new chapter.
This story has a special place in my mind. _
I was just re-reading the story and found out that you are working on the 23rd chapter. I am really happy to learn that we will soon be able to read more of this incredible story and know more about Haruhi's and Nekozawa's growing relationship. Looking forward for the new chapter.
This story has a special place in my mind. _
3/26/2016 c22 Belin
Yayyyyyyy
Checked just now and so the new chapter and I was so happy. Seems like things are going to get some interesting turns. I love your Neko-chan and Bereznoff but I would want to see more active Haruhi. lol
I know, I know she is the oblivious girl but I just want some info from her side. Is she comfortable with the situation? what does she think about Neko-chan's odd life? Does she like him? What does she think about his 'advances'?
As my friends already shamelessly relieved :8
Bella lol
Yayyyyyyy
Checked just now and so the new chapter and I was so happy. Seems like things are going to get some interesting turns. I love your Neko-chan and Bereznoff but I would want to see more active Haruhi. lol
I know, I know she is the oblivious girl but I just want some info from her side. Is she comfortable with the situation? what does she think about Neko-chan's odd life? Does she like him? What does she think about his 'advances'?
As my friends already shamelessly relieved :8
Bella lol
2/21/2016 c22 Guest
I'm so glad you decided to keep writing. I've been checking and checking to see if you'd update and you did! I can't wait to read more!
I'm so glad you decided to keep writing. I've been checking and checking to see if you'd update and you did! I can't wait to read more!
2/20/2016 c22 SnellsLaw
What did it mean? It meant you should have a daughter with Haruhi. jk
Nekozawa needs a therapist to get rid of the second voice in his head but this is fanfiction and the extra voice makes him much more awesome, so no. You made Nekozawa so sexy and his creepiness is more cute than intimidating. I couldn't stop laughing at the daughter's idea imagining what crosses his mind.
Haruhi started to think of him as a man; that is so sweet. I feel like the next chapter is going to be much hotter. :D
Oh also I have a question. In flashback Haruhi was a kid playing with the other kids when Nekozawa approached her as a shadow and then later she was told not to talk to him. I wonder if he was the same age as her, or he is just not growing up anymore. It seemed like Nekozawa in the flashback was the same age as he is currently while Haruhi was a child.
What did it mean? It meant you should have a daughter with Haruhi. jk
Nekozawa needs a therapist to get rid of the second voice in his head but this is fanfiction and the extra voice makes him much more awesome, so no. You made Nekozawa so sexy and his creepiness is more cute than intimidating. I couldn't stop laughing at the daughter's idea imagining what crosses his mind.
Haruhi started to think of him as a man; that is so sweet. I feel like the next chapter is going to be much hotter. :D
Oh also I have a question. In flashback Haruhi was a kid playing with the other kids when Nekozawa approached her as a shadow and then later she was told not to talk to him. I wonder if he was the same age as her, or he is just not growing up anymore. It seemed like Nekozawa in the flashback was the same age as he is currently while Haruhi was a child.
2/20/2016 c22 Alice Beckheart
Sweet Gods! I can't thank you more for posting it today. I adored this chapter. Unfortunately, I am not good with maintaining accounts (always forget my passwords).
That sentence "..he was still hot and bothered... to finish what he started" got me hot and bothered for the next chapter (heheh). I love how you introduced Haruhi's thoughts on him. I adore this kind of stuff. Reading about character's feelings and reactions makes me excited. It gives the story depth and gives us the opportunity to go through the emotions of characters, be them for a short while.
Arai's actions are a bit unsettling and that gives Nekozawa additional dark charm.
Regards
Alice
Sweet Gods! I can't thank you more for posting it today. I adored this chapter. Unfortunately, I am not good with maintaining accounts (always forget my passwords).
That sentence "..he was still hot and bothered... to finish what he started" got me hot and bothered for the next chapter (heheh). I love how you introduced Haruhi's thoughts on him. I adore this kind of stuff. Reading about character's feelings and reactions makes me excited. It gives the story depth and gives us the opportunity to go through the emotions of characters, be them for a short while.
Arai's actions are a bit unsettling and that gives Nekozawa additional dark charm.
Regards
Alice
2/20/2016 c22 Sasha Aquilina
Finally the chapter is published. I am happy to read it. It is heartwarming to know that Haruhi has developed some feelings for Umehito. I am a little bit confused about Isao. I don't remember this character from previous chapters. He must be the new character you said you were creating previously in your update-notes. So does he know Nekozawa? He seemed suspicious.
Waiting for the next update
Random Reader~~ (Bella you are no better, just wrote my name there :P )
Finally the chapter is published. I am happy to read it. It is heartwarming to know that Haruhi has developed some feelings for Umehito. I am a little bit confused about Isao. I don't remember this character from previous chapters. He must be the new character you said you were creating previously in your update-notes. So does he know Nekozawa? He seemed suspicious.
Waiting for the next update
Random Reader~~ (Bella you are no better, just wrote my name there :P )
2/18/2016 c21 Alice Beckheart
I am so happy to learn that you are working on the story and the chapter is almost ready to be consumed by the hungry readers such as me :) hehehe Good luck with the tests :) Hope you do well. Looking forward to the next chapter.
I am so happy to learn that you are working on the story and the chapter is almost ready to be consumed by the hungry readers such as me :) hehehe Good luck with the tests :) Hope you do well. Looking forward to the next chapter.
2/17/2016 c21 Alice Beckheart
I can't wait any longer. I literally check for an update every day. :/ please dear writer post the new chapter. Lots of love for your hard work :)
I can't wait any longer. I literally check for an update every day. :/ please dear writer post the new chapter. Lots of love for your hard work :)
2/14/2016 c21 Belin
I am so happy to learn that you are working on the next chapter author-san! Thank you!
Alice and Sasha if you think it wasn't good enough to write my name and last name also write my address. Dummies!
I will also be happy to read more Ouran fantasy stories with hot stings like this one author-san. Pretty please write more. You are my favourite from now on.
I am so happy to learn that you are working on the next chapter author-san! Thank you!
Alice and Sasha if you think it wasn't good enough to write my name and last name also write my address. Dummies!
I will also be happy to read more Ouran fantasy stories with hot stings like this one author-san. Pretty please write more. You are my favourite from now on.
2/13/2016 c21 Alice Beckheart
I just finished reading this amazing story. Thank you dear writer for taking your time and writing something this amazing and beautiful. I have noticed some spelling errors that can be easily fixed. This is fresh take on Ouran Highshool Host club story. The plot is unique and original for this fandom. The story is engaging. It has some elements of classicism (Chapter 14 "You're really pushing my limit, woman!After everything I've done for you, you have the gall to continue disobeying me"), on the other hand author emphasizes the character's aims for equality (Chapter 9 "Someone I can finally call a true friend").
Another thing I have noticed was author's growth. Later chapters were written with more solid language, characters were introduced better and funner and in more mature and comical matter.
My only criticism would be the lack of emotional spectrum introduction. I want to read how Haruhi feels from his touch or sudden kiss, or hints he makes. I want to see the story in more emotional level, where you put emphasis on character's feelings towards each other more forwardly. Nekozawa honestly is written more or less with emotional descriptive moments. Haruhi doesn't have much.
I also learnt that you are busy and won't update in the nearest future, but I hope you will find time between your other activities to continue your story. Good luck with everything anyways.
Also thanks to my friend Bella Invitski for showing me this beautiful story.
Regards
Alice ️
I just finished reading this amazing story. Thank you dear writer for taking your time and writing something this amazing and beautiful. I have noticed some spelling errors that can be easily fixed. This is fresh take on Ouran Highshool Host club story. The plot is unique and original for this fandom. The story is engaging. It has some elements of classicism (Chapter 14 "You're really pushing my limit, woman!After everything I've done for you, you have the gall to continue disobeying me"), on the other hand author emphasizes the character's aims for equality (Chapter 9 "Someone I can finally call a true friend").
Another thing I have noticed was author's growth. Later chapters were written with more solid language, characters were introduced better and funner and in more mature and comical matter.
My only criticism would be the lack of emotional spectrum introduction. I want to read how Haruhi feels from his touch or sudden kiss, or hints he makes. I want to see the story in more emotional level, where you put emphasis on character's feelings towards each other more forwardly. Nekozawa honestly is written more or less with emotional descriptive moments. Haruhi doesn't have much.
I also learnt that you are busy and won't update in the nearest future, but I hope you will find time between your other activities to continue your story. Good luck with everything anyways.
Also thanks to my friend Bella Invitski for showing me this beautiful story.
Regards
Alice ️
2/12/2016 c21 Random reader
I knew you would love it Bella. They usually post chapter by chapter on this site. So my guess is it's not complete yet. Just bookmark it.
I knew you would love it Bella. They usually post chapter by chapter on this site. So my guess is it's not complete yet. Just bookmark it.
2/10/2016 c21 Belin
Read it after a friend advised it yesterday. Good! When will you update? Is it complete? You should post more of this. Now i am addicted. post moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Read it after a friend advised it yesterday. Good! When will you update? Is it complete? You should post more of this. Now i am addicted. post moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee