for The Crying Bowl10/17/2020 c1 Hetc
Great story, thanks for writing.
It works well as a stand alone, but has potential for more.
Great story, thanks for writing.
It works well as a stand alone, but has potential for more.
6/23/2015 c1 hotJaz16
I just wanted to send a kind word your way and I hope you have a wonderful week :-)
I just wanted to send a kind word your way and I hope you have a wonderful week :-)
6/4/2015 c1 Too lazy
OMG you made me cry, that's good by the way, it means your story has squeezed my heart (wait, what.. squeezed? I weird myself out somtimes...) Well, anyway, i loved it! You made me cry when he found all the animals, oh my gosh such feels! Your a great author, continue writing more brilliant stories!
OMG you made me cry, that's good by the way, it means your story has squeezed my heart (wait, what.. squeezed? I weird myself out somtimes...) Well, anyway, i loved it! You made me cry when he found all the animals, oh my gosh such feels! Your a great author, continue writing more brilliant stories!
12/17/2014 c1 AvidReader4746
This was quite the realistic insight into the mind of a young boy. Also, I felt Snape's advice was appropriate. On another note, as an Irish person, I appreciated the Gaelic references :)
This was quite the realistic insight into the mind of a young boy. Also, I felt Snape's advice was appropriate. On another note, as an Irish person, I appreciated the Gaelic references :)
10/10/2013 c1 Anne
Pity you aren't going to continue... I've just read Great Expectations, and I loved it so much. Anyway, I'm glad you decided to write this, even if it's a oneshot. :)
Pity you aren't going to continue... I've just read Great Expectations, and I loved it so much. Anyway, I'm glad you decided to write this, even if it's a oneshot. :)
3/14/2013 c1 jenna
This is awesome! I would really love to see you continue this and start the second half of great expectations- i want to find out about Albus's journey! Keep writing, you do a great job!
This is awesome! I would really love to see you continue this and start the second half of great expectations- i want to find out about Albus's journey! Keep writing, you do a great job!
9/29/2012 c1 Guest
Cool story! I loved your story Great Expectations, and this story fills in the blanks of the aftermath of that story line. I always rather thought Fred and George would have Monkey patronuses, but now that I think of it, a squirrel is fitting as well. Now I'm intrigued... What house do you think Albus Severus is best suited for?
Cool story! I loved your story Great Expectations, and this story fills in the blanks of the aftermath of that story line. I always rather thought Fred and George would have Monkey patronuses, but now that I think of it, a squirrel is fitting as well. Now I'm intrigued... What house do you think Albus Severus is best suited for?
12/3/2011 c1 
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Made up that I have found you on here I aven't been able to log into my account on HP fanfiction website, so I had to set up an account on here. Loved this story, like your others it was brill. Thank you and I hope you have a lovely christmas. (I was sophiewalpole on the HP site)
3marycatherinehayesMade up that I have found you on here I aven't been able to log into my account on HP fanfiction website, so I had to set up an account on here. Loved this story, like your others it was brill. Thank you and I hope you have a lovely christmas. (I was sophiewalpole on the HP site)
11/12/2011 c1 GamesWithGrace
I love how Albus gets to see all the Patronuses of his "dream friends", but I was wondering something: Is the reason Albus didn't have the dreams for a while because he didn't really want them? And then as soon as he did want them, he saw them again? If this is the case, I hope Albus goes back to wanting to play with his "dream friends".
Just keep writing, just keep writing, just keep writing, writing, writing... Please!
I love how Albus gets to see all the Patronuses of his "dream friends", but I was wondering something: Is the reason Albus didn't have the dreams for a while because he didn't really want them? And then as soon as he did want them, he saw them again? If this is the case, I hope Albus goes back to wanting to play with his "dream friends".
Just keep writing, just keep writing, just keep writing, writing, writing... Please!
4/25/2011 c1 7VickyStarfish
i really like this, though it seems more like it could be a longer story, rather than a one-shot...
i also like the idea of Rose leading Al astray ;)
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7VickyStarfishi really like this, though it seems more like it could be a longer story, rather than a one-shot...
i also like the idea of Rose leading Al astray ;)
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1/6/2011 c1 1MsCat
Ooo yay I liked it, I wish it was a longer sequel though! I hope you write more! I loved Great Expectations so much, and this is just like another wee bit of the story.
1MsCatOoo yay I liked it, I wish it was a longer sequel though! I hope you write more! I loved Great Expectations so much, and this is just like another wee bit of the story.
1/23/2010 c1 27frodogenic
A squirrel Patronus for Fred? That is so totally, perfectly right. :) Excellent story, I really enjoyed it. What I like the most was the pseudo-dream quality-sort of stumbling one's way into a deeper level of the world. It felt rather Tolkien or Lewis-esque (if you've ever read The Magician's Nephew, this story made me think a little of the Wood Between the Worlds). Beautifully done! I hope we'll get to see some more from you someday.
27frodogenicA squirrel Patronus for Fred? That is so totally, perfectly right. :) Excellent story, I really enjoyed it. What I like the most was the pseudo-dream quality-sort of stumbling one's way into a deeper level of the world. It felt rather Tolkien or Lewis-esque (if you've ever read The Magician's Nephew, this story made me think a little of the Wood Between the Worlds). Beautifully done! I hope we'll get to see some more from you someday.
1/9/2010 c1 4wrappedinharry
Oh, Severus, you break my heart. All the wrong choices. Would the right choices have been so hard? *sigh*
Rose is a force of nature, isn't she? I often felt sorry for Ron and Harry with Hermione bossing them around and now poor Al is in the same boat. LOL.
So, the squirrel Patronus is Fred (perfect), the big and small (clumsy) wolf, Remus and Tonks. There was Padfoot and Lily and James, and the bright bird was DD. Albus Severus will never be alone, no matter how dark his hour becomes, I feel. Even Severus is in the wings. I wish that he was with the others, though... he is sorey in need of bright company.
I love Al. He is an weary sole (already) in a young body, isn't he. A truly lovely boy who, if you ever expand on this, will steal my heart just like his father did.
Now I really have finished your stories. *sob*
Lesley~
4wrappedinharryOh, Severus, you break my heart. All the wrong choices. Would the right choices have been so hard? *sigh*
Rose is a force of nature, isn't she? I often felt sorry for Ron and Harry with Hermione bossing them around and now poor Al is in the same boat. LOL.
So, the squirrel Patronus is Fred (perfect), the big and small (clumsy) wolf, Remus and Tonks. There was Padfoot and Lily and James, and the bright bird was DD. Albus Severus will never be alone, no matter how dark his hour becomes, I feel. Even Severus is in the wings. I wish that he was with the others, though... he is sorey in need of bright company.
I love Al. He is an weary sole (already) in a young body, isn't he. A truly lovely boy who, if you ever expand on this, will steal my heart just like his father did.
Now I really have finished your stories. *sob*
Lesley~