
5/18/2016 c2
19The-Ghoul-Aj717
Ok,I can honestly tell you that...it's awesome and hilarious,also,a great moral lesson,you know?

Ok,I can honestly tell you that...it's awesome and hilarious,also,a great moral lesson,you know?
8/10/2014 c2 Unknown2112015
LMAO, and I can see this actually taken place. But you are forgetting Lee and a few others right.
LMAO, and I can see this actually taken place. But you are forgetting Lee and a few others right.
3/13/2014 c1 daniel hollinger
I like it but the men are fucked hahahaha
I like it but the men are fucked hahahaha
10/17/2013 c2 Guest
I liked the way you portrayed Hinata in the story. It was extremely funny. The next step ?... WRITE A SEQUEL, but maybe add kids to it as well.
I liked the way you portrayed Hinata in the story. It was extremely funny. The next step ?... WRITE A SEQUEL, but maybe add kids to it as well.
8/8/2013 c1 Guest
You're a very good writer, you just need to work on your capitalization.
You're a very good writer, you just need to work on your capitalization.
9/28/2012 c2 moira33
Loved the all story was hilarious I laugh so hard and this scene was priceless :
Sasuke and naruto were indeed trying to jump out the window when their wives broke down the door.
"Come on hinata, there's no need to angry." Naruto said while backing up.
"Sakura…..I meant what I said." Sasuke said.
"Why did you say that!" naruto asked
"We are going to go down anyway, might as well go down fighting." Sasuke said.
Loved the all story was hilarious I laugh so hard and this scene was priceless :
Sasuke and naruto were indeed trying to jump out the window when their wives broke down the door.
"Come on hinata, there's no need to angry." Naruto said while backing up.
"Sakura…..I meant what I said." Sasuke said.
"Why did you say that!" naruto asked
"We are going to go down anyway, might as well go down fighting." Sasuke said.
8/6/2012 c1 lasthingsaid1
please write this story and make another story continuing to after everythings defeated but idk create newer threats for the story!
please write this story and make another story continuing to after everythings defeated but idk create newer threats for the story!