for Our Moments12/11/2009 c8 moonbright
“I thought it was pretty clever. Brady had already decided that he was going as a Quidditch player and told me that I needed to come up with something that would go with his costume. I considered going as a Bludger so that I could run around and hit people, but decided that a Snitch would be prettier.”
this line made me laugh so hard! seriously i was in the family room with my mom and she gave me the weirdest look. this story is amazing and i'm excited i still have four more chapters to read :)
“I thought it was pretty clever. Brady had already decided that he was going as a Quidditch player and told me that I needed to come up with something that would go with his costume. I considered going as a Bludger so that I could run around and hit people, but decided that a Snitch would be prettier.”
this line made me laugh so hard! seriously i was in the family room with my mom and she gave me the weirdest look. this story is amazing and i'm excited i still have four more chapters to read :)
12/5/2009 c12 lasting illusion
So I decided I absolutely ADORE this story!
The way you portray James and Lily's relationship is so...cute? Romeo and Juliet like? I dunno it is hard to explain. But you made it seem like they had like an ultimate love story, where they are going to be together forever (sigh which sadly we all know isn't true! :(
But ya I WISH! JK Rowling would give us a prequel! That would probably just make my life haha! SERIOUSLY! Anyones this is definitely helping me get through the fact that she won't lol!
Even though I loved their friendship, and the first date, this next part is going to be THE BEST! I love it!
The only thing that frusterated me and I am sure James too lol in this chapter was how Lily wanted to keep it a secret! Poor James! Though I think I understand why Lily is doing it? maybe lol...or maybe it will be explained in the next chapter! :)
Something I was slightly curious about is if there were going to be any conrontations with good ol 'Sev' and ya I know you will probably just say that this is a James/Lily story...but I cannot help it, i sorta like those Lily/Severus confrontations, and James saves the day..I know cliche..ah but the drama!
Well anyways I am getting off track..I wanted to tell you one other thing that I liked (tho there are DEFINITELY more then two things I liked/loved but I don't know if you'd appreciate the annoying huge review lol ) I like when you don't miss the huge gaps, like when you sorta do the next day...or explain what happened through out the week. Hmm does that make sense?
I just remember at the beginning of the story you said this story was only gonna be moments from the life...but I like that you sorta changed that...right?...hm or maybe i am just imagining things!
Well anyways! Cannot wait for the next update! I am sure it is gonna be spectacular! I hope you can update son tho! I am dying to find out what happens next! :D
So I decided I absolutely ADORE this story!
The way you portray James and Lily's relationship is so...cute? Romeo and Juliet like? I dunno it is hard to explain. But you made it seem like they had like an ultimate love story, where they are going to be together forever (sigh which sadly we all know isn't true! :(
But ya I WISH! JK Rowling would give us a prequel! That would probably just make my life haha! SERIOUSLY! Anyones this is definitely helping me get through the fact that she won't lol!
Even though I loved their friendship, and the first date, this next part is going to be THE BEST! I love it!
The only thing that frusterated me and I am sure James too lol in this chapter was how Lily wanted to keep it a secret! Poor James! Though I think I understand why Lily is doing it? maybe lol...or maybe it will be explained in the next chapter! :)
Something I was slightly curious about is if there were going to be any conrontations with good ol 'Sev' and ya I know you will probably just say that this is a James/Lily story...but I cannot help it, i sorta like those Lily/Severus confrontations, and James saves the day..I know cliche..ah but the drama!
Well anyways I am getting off track..I wanted to tell you one other thing that I liked (tho there are DEFINITELY more then two things I liked/loved but I don't know if you'd appreciate the annoying huge review lol ) I like when you don't miss the huge gaps, like when you sorta do the next day...or explain what happened through out the week. Hmm does that make sense?
I just remember at the beginning of the story you said this story was only gonna be moments from the life...but I like that you sorta changed that...right?...hm or maybe i am just imagining things!
Well anyways! Cannot wait for the next update! I am sure it is gonna be spectacular! I hope you can update son tho! I am dying to find out what happens next! :D
12/3/2009 c12 
5xMrsJamesPotterx
I think that this is the best L/J fanfic I have EVER read. No joke, it made me laugh, made me cry. Just absolutley awesome. Well done and please please keep writing!
5xMrsJamesPotterxI think that this is the best L/J fanfic I have EVER read. No joke, it made me laugh, made me cry. Just absolutley awesome. Well done and please please keep writing!
12/2/2009 c12 screaminghallelujah21
Yay! An update! Great chapter, as usual. Can't wait for the next one.
Yay! An update! Great chapter, as usual. Can't wait for the next one.
12/2/2009 c12 DobbyLivesAgain
first of all, Thanks for updating! lol
second, fantastic job! I cant tell you how much i enjoy your writing!
I just about died lauhing when lily said:
"You know how moody Sirius gets when he doesn’t get enough time with you."
lol, cannot wait for the next update! :D
first of all, Thanks for updating! lol
second, fantastic job! I cant tell you how much i enjoy your writing!
I just about died lauhing when lily said:
"You know how moody Sirius gets when he doesn’t get enough time with you."
lol, cannot wait for the next update! :D
12/2/2009 c12 5Oldmanmah
I have been waiting FOREVER FOR THIS. Great chapter, as usual. I'm looking forward to how you are going to spice this one up in future chapters Don't give up and keep writing!
5OldmanmahI have been waiting FOREVER FOR THIS. Great chapter, as usual. I'm looking forward to how you are going to spice this one up in future chapters Don't give up and keep writing!
12/1/2009 c12 lucykevinfan
Aww, they are so cute! I loved it!
Aww, they are so cute! I loved it!